How effective and realistic is Willy Russell's presentation of the school trip in 'our day out'?

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How effective and realistic is Willy Russell’s presentation of the school trip in ‘our day out’?

‘Our day out’ was written as a television play in 1977 but taken directly from Willy Russell’s personal experience of teaching in a Liverpool comprehensive school in 1974. Not only does Willy Russell’s experience stem from his time in teaching but also from being a pupil at two Liverpool comprehensive schools, leaving at 15 with no qualifications. This gives him a good understanding of situations described in the play from the point of view of both children and teachers. Liverpool at that time had a large working class population and a lot of poverty, with huge social problems. Unemployment was growing and many of the children would have had little hope of a career and a good future. In those days children without academic aptitude in secondary education were often regarded as hopeless and left to sink or swim. Russell fully understood this as it was his own background.  

I believe that the school trip in ‘our day out’ is realistic because, not only is the characterisation excellent, both students and teachers are portrayed honestly and are given a lot of depth for such a short play, but also the dialogue is naturalistic. In addition, the general set up for the play is quite believable, the teacher of a remedial department organising a day trip, then at the last minute a disciplinarian deputy head joining the party, creating a potential recipe for disaster. However some of the events within the play are obviously taken a step further for comic value. This reminds us that this is a play, and therefore can not ever be completely realistic, and must be given a certain amount of poetic licence.

There are four teachers present on the outing: Mrs. Kay, Mr. Briggs and two younger teachers, Colin and Susan. Mrs. Kay is the teacher of the remedial class – ironically called the “Progress” class. I think she is an unusual teacher because of her attitudes and beliefs, but nonetheless believable and her character is consistent. I find it difficult to judge whether her character is realistic or not when it comes to her emotional and physical closeness to the students, as teachers are not allowed to behave in this way now, although they may have been in the ‘70s. Also school outings are much more regulated now.

She is kind, has liberal views towards teaching, wants to broaden the outlook of the children and give them some fun and is well-liked by them. As opposed to Mr. Briggs, the authoritarian, she makes an active effort to break down the barriers between herself and her pupils. This is demonstrated by her saying:

        “I tried to get the kids to call me Helen once. I had a class full of them chanting it. Two minutes later they were calling me Mrs. Kay again.”

She links arms with Carol and snuggles up with her on the seat in the coach. Mr. Briggs describes her as “more of a mother hen than a teacher.”  Her attitudes and character are shown in the scene where she tells a pack of lies to the driver of the coach to get his sympathy for the children (he then proceeds to give them money to buy sweets) and by her impulsive decisions to go to the zoo and the beach. I think her attitude of commitment to the children and her passion for their enjoyment are realistic although I am not sure that her actions in the play are quite so realistic, given that school trips are usually fairly well planned.

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Mr Briggs has been sent on the outing to keep order and proceeds to try to do this. He clearly has no sympathy with the children – he sees them as the enemy. He calls them ‘non-academics’ and characterises them as having two quid pocket money and watching television till all hours. He actually accuses Mrs. Kay of “being on their side.” (To which she replies: “absolutely Mr Briggs, absolutely.”) Mr Briggs never talks to the children; he talks at them or about them. He takes their bad behaviour as a personal slight and betrayal. His discussions with Mrs ...

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