I’m in mybedroom. The door is shut which means I am supposed to be doing my homework but I am finding it extremely hard to concentrate. My mind is set on what happened last night.

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I’m in my bedroom. The door is shut which means I am supposed to be doing my homework but I am finding it extremely hard to concentrate. My mind is set on what happened last night.

At seven-o clock Tim phoned me and asked if I would like to go to the fair with him. I love fairs and I thought it would be a great opportunity to get to know him better. So I agreed and he said he would pick me up in about thirty minutes. I rushed up stairs to get ready. In my room I could hear my Mum Jenny, Dad Mark and brother Joe laughing hysterically down stairs in the lounge, I thought that they were probably watching a cheesy chat show or some thing along those lines.

          Tim just turned 16 last month so for his birthday his Grandpa and Dad cashed in to buy him a motor bike. It is top of the range, sparkly purple with green stripes running down the sides. I hope he brings it I thought to myself, 80 mph down a flat stretch of road with the wind in my hair. One knock on the door ended my daydream; it was Joe coming to be a little devil like usual. He sings annoying chants to me whenever I see Tim, for example ‘Rachel loves Tim’ or ‘Tim loves Rachel’. I don’t mind it the first time but he repeats it over and over until I get so angry I start to go red in the face.

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          I completely forgot about the time. I looked down at my watch and the time was seven twenty-five, I immediately shoved a ten-pound note into a bag. The doorbell rang and I charged downstairs so fast that I nearly ended up in a pile at the bottom. As I opened the door a strong whiff of petrol came over me, I thought that Tim must have got some new cheap after-shave. I was just about to sarcastically comment on the wonderful scent he was wearing when I looked up. To my surprise it wasn’t Tim, ...

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