I couldn’t wait for our adventure to begin

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I couldn't wait for our adventure to begin, we were waiting at Heathrow airport, in the check in, I was going on safari with my best friend Liam, we had been waiting for this trip for what felt like years, but it was actually seven months, we had been given this trip to us as a leaving present from our whole village in Ireland, our village was a remote, well hidden village, we had left it in order to pursue our careers as zoologists so this safari was an ideal start, every zoologist dreams of going on safari, we are going to have the experience of safari even before we start our course. James and I had loads of luggage with us, we were worried that it would be too much to have on the plane, as we had seen on television that if you have to much luggage you are charged for it, and we didn't have enough money to pay for it, it was our turn, gave our tickets and our passports in, both were fine, but we were still waiting on the luggage, the stewardess looked up at me as if to say to, "oh dear, I