I hate this place.

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I hate this place. I hate this gloomy room and this draughty window. I hate these people and I hate ... Whoa! I think my life may just get better.

They look really nice. A tall, handsome man and his petite, brunette wife. Well, I guess it's his wife. They look like they're married. You know what, I bet they are loaded. You can just tell these kinds of people can't you? She's got her long beige coat and her perfectly clean brown shoes. In fact, I'm sure they're the Christian Dior ones I saw down the High Street last weekend.

Anyway, imagine what it would be like if I lived in their house. It's probably a great big mansion in the middle of some great forest. You know, like the ones you see on T.V. I would have my own lovely pink, painted room and my own swimming pool, gym and...

"Hey! Haven't you heard of knocking?"

"There are people here to see you," she says to me in her squeaky stuck up voice.

"Yes!" I yell as I jump around. Nearly falling off my bed may I add?