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I wonder who did it. Why would the kill Andy? said Janet I dont know.or I dont care he deserved it said Mary Mary how could you say that Andy was our friend!

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"Missing Person Found" "Friday the 13th Andy Cone was reported missing. His head was found in secluded woods near the ski cabins. His body was dismembered. His body parts were found buried around the head. The cause of death was blunt force truma. Police has no leads yet, but they found a long brunette hair that they believe belongs to a woman. No arrests have been made. Please call the Colorado Springs Police Department if you have any information that may help." "I wonder who did it. Why would the kill Andy?" said Janet "I don't know....or I don't care he deserved it" said Mary "Mary how could you say that Andy was our friend!" "That's what you think. I gotta get to class."Just then the bell rang "Wait don't go...." "Bye Janet." Mary and I have been friends since diapers. But lately she has been out of it like she hiding something I'm going to find out thought Janet. Later on after school I saw Mary. "Hey" said Janet "Hey..." "What's been up with you lately?' "WILL YOU JUST MIND YOUR OWN BUSINESS!!!?" "I'm your best friend I thought I would try to help but it seems as though you don't want it!" ...read more.

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I walk over to my computer, opened the web page to the Colorado Springs newspaper. I typed in Andy Cone in the search box. Several articles pop up about his death. "His body was dismembered. His body parts were found buried around the head..." It wasn't what i was looking for I typed suspects in Andy Cone case. I wonder why I was doing this. Mary couldn't have possible killed him. "long brunette hair that they believe belongs to a woman..."The article didn't help any. Police had ran the hair for DNA but didn't have any luck with a match. Someone touch my shoulder. "What you doing? Did I frighten you?" "Dad! Yes you did. I was looking up information about Andy's case." "Why?" "I was wondering if they had any leads yet." "O well a friend of mine works on the case I'll talk to him and see what I can find out. Why you want to know this any way?" "Um... Andy was my friend dad. I think I should be able to know who did it..." The lie just flew out. I did kinda think I should be able to know if there were any leads but that wasn't why I looked up the article. ...read more.

Conclusion

He agreed I lead him into the woods. We started making out the he took off his clothes... I paused he paused too then he realized I still wasn't ready. I told him I was ready. I spotted a huge branch I picked up and hit him on the head. He fell to the ground. I waited to see if he was going to wake up but he didn't. I realized that I didn't want him dead, but I had done it I needed to finish it. I went to the back of his cabin where I knew he kept an ax. I cut him up and buried him..." "You don't have to do this Mary." "Yes... I do you know my secret and I can't let you live..."She stepped closer to me "I realized she was really going through with this. I had to do something. I turned my head. It was too late I felt it .it was in my stomach, the pain was unbearable. She stuck the knife deeper inside me, then step back. I watched her I felt my mouth open. "Andy...did...love you...but he broke... up with you......so it would be......easier to deal with......the pain...of moving...away from... Colorado........." I fell to the ground. The last thing I saw was her shocked face. ...read more.

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