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In the Darkness

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In the Darkness It was dark, almost to dark for it to be a normal darkness, she didn't know what to do, she was trapped, the darkness was swallowing her and she couldn't escape. She was a strange girl; she was one of those girls who were different to every other girl. She didn't really have many friends but that was mainly due to her family. Her parents restricted her with the nature of how they were brought up themselves, not really being allowed out. I think there was something about her that made me think that she wanted to change. She didn't want to lead the life she was leading at the moment, I kept seeing her out in town without her parents on her own, maybe she has snuck out, I'm not sure. ...read more.


She was waiting now for it to come, she had spent so much time trying to escape from the dark that she didn't want to try anymore, she was done and finally she could rest, rest forever. She couldn't remember the clouds of doom or the sadness of her family that used to sound all around her, and she didn't want to remember any more, now she knew what she had to do and she was okay with that. She would never see the people she loved again but that was the price she was willing to pay, for she knew she brought only sadness and anger to their lives, and the darkness that followed here where ever she went, even if she was out side and the sun was blazing over her head she saw ...read more.


So I say now, goodbye and love for always, I will always be with you even if you can't see me or hear me, whether you like it or not, because no matter how hard I try I could never truly leave you.... Her last thought were her goodbyes to them and she hoped with all her might that after some time they would understand why she had to do this, and that they would not blame themselves for what she did, because they where the best family and friends she could ever have hoped for, she was just not meant for this world, it was her time to go now, no matter what people did or said, she was done. She slipped slowly into the darkness, getting the rest she so much craved, to never wake up again. ?? ?? ?? ?? Steven Berryman Original Writing 10th January 2011 ...read more.

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