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Michael Ritchie 10E        -  -        Inner Eye        

Inner Eye

The cruel October winds whipped around George Daly’s face, making his green eyes water. The weather was always harsh in Netherfield at this time of year. The dark and cloudy Monday sky made George feel more despondent than before. He knew that nothing else today would make him feel any better. He had double maths taught by Miss Noble, followed with Biology with Mr Smith. PE and English followed them and none of them were very popular with George. He walked up the school drive amid the throng of students and teachers. He opened the big glass doors of the school and walked in.

        Feeling more pessimistic than usual, George headed up the Maths corridor and towards his form room in the History department. His best friend, Izzy Beard was already waiting outside, nodding his head in time to his Walkman. George walked past Rainbow Zollner, his ex-girlfriend, who gave him a piercing stare.

"Hey Izzy," said George, ignoring Rainbow, who was still glaring at him.

"Hello," said Izzy, switching off his Walkman. "Good weekend?"

"I suppose," mumbled George, shrugging. "You?"

"I got onto level sixteen of ‘Dungeon Master’!" smiled Izzy. "That final dungeon dweller is really hard to kill!"

"I’ve been stuck on level eighteen for a month," said George. "Try to catch up!" Before Izzy had a chance to make some kind of smart-alec quip that he was famous for, Mr Ball, their balding form tutor appeared and led them into the class.

        The class filed through the door and sat down. They all talked and laughed as Mr Ball set up his computer. George was a stocky boy with short brown hair and an ivory complexion. Izzy on the other hand was taller and thinner than George, with curly blonde hair, grey eyes and a mass of freckles.

"Silence please," called Mr Ball over the jabbering of class 10B. After a minute or so, the class were silent. Mr Ball read the register and picked up some papers on his desk, dropping a few that he didn’t need.

"Any boys interested in playing in the football team this Friday must go to Mr Benson’s office at lunch time," he said in his dull tone. He then said, "And congratulations to the girls hockey team who won their match against Buxford College yesterday. Does anyone else have any other news?" Everyone was suddenly unvoiced. You could have heard a pin drop.

"Okay then," announced Mr Ball, "off you go to your first lesson." The scraping of chairs signalled it was time to leave. Izzy and George joined the crush to leave the room. George squeezed out into the warm corridor and headed to the Maths room.

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        "Three lots of homework!" cried George as he and Izzy walked down the school drive back home again, amongst the accumulation of tired students.

"What subjects were they in?" asked Izzy.

"Maths, Biology and English," replied George.

"What do you have to do for that English piece then?" questioned Izzy.

"Write a fictional story for coursework,"

"You got any ideas?"

"Not really. I might do a detective story."

George and Izzy continued talking about school until the reached the zebra crossing at the post office and Izzy had to cross over the road.

        The next Monday something strange happened. The ...

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