It all started at warehouse number 107.

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Matthew Warren                         GCSE English                    Original Writing

It all started at warehouse number 107. There was a faint smell of the salt air from outside and the frequent sound of a ships horn was heard. Inside the warehouse the light was streaming through the windows turning the dust in the air into shining frozen pillars.

In the centre of the warehouse sitting at a table were two dimly lit figures. The first was Sir David Crane a wealthy business man with a gambling problem. He was wearing a blood stained hand made Italian suit that had been torn in several different places. His hands were tied behind his back and over his head was a large black bag.  The other figure was Des who was a scruffy young man wearing and hooded tracksuit top and dirty jeans.  

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Des had a serious drug habit he was desperately short of money and owed thousands of pounds to a loan shark called Steve.  Steve was known for his original way of showing someone that he wanted his money back, he would track them down break his victim’s knee caps with a large sledge hammer.  Des had agreed to help his friend Matt with this kidnapping job as it seemed like an answer to all his problems.

Matt had been hired by a certain gentleman’s gambling club to kidnap Sir David Crane in an attempt to get the ...

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