It was a dark, dreary, damp, November's night; the only light was the flickering street lamp down the winding road.

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Claire Underhill

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It was a dark, dreary, damp, November’s night; the only light was the flickering street lamp down the winding road. Invisible Owls were hooting in the trees, louder than normal. The sky was eclipsed with speedy, black bats. Harsh rain was bouncing off the pavements in a rhythmic pattern drip…drip…drip. The bitter splashes came up to my knees. From the drizzly rain I could taste the invigorating air and I could see the autumn damp leaves on the floor.  As I walked further I could see and smell the smoke from the chimneys. I inhaled deeply to smell the burning paper and coal, the smoky, musty smell was reminiscent of bonfire nights as a child, evoking feelings of excitement and security.

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 I had a sudden urge to look behind, I could hear something. My heart was racing like the clouds on a blustery day. My footsteps became faster. Before I knew it I could feel the soft grass beneath my feet. I was at the unoccupied mansion. I walked up to the big, brown, bulky gate which led to the garden. I climbed the uneven steps to the shed. Often I came here when I wanted to get away from the malicious world. I crouched down to sit in the shed, I propped the door open with a sodden brick. I ...

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