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Joyriders - Creative Writing

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Jinita Batavia Page 1 28/04/2007 Coursework; - Creative Writing Joyriders I had just died by getting trapped and then squeezed to death as the walls closed in on me playing `Tomb Raider Three'. In addition, I had successfully reached the final stage, when I died and then remembered that I had forgotten to save the last stage after being on the computer for hours upon end. At this point, I was agitated and really annoyed when I heard, "Ah, shut it you over drunk sod!" my parents were at each others' throats again. "If I were to have a death wish it would be to kill you in such a way that your entrails would ooze out slowly..." replied my disturbingly vexed father. After hearing months of non-stop controversy, I knew that there was only one thing left to say. Moreover, I was meditating about... " I want a divorce, I want a divorce now!" mum bawled down the stairs. Well I knew that I shared a special bond with my mum, but reading my thoughts, she is positively becoming a mind reader, I thought trying to avoid the topic. It could have just have been intuition. There was a silence in the long empty corridor leading up to the stairs, where I sat fed up and angry with my parents. ...read more.

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"What babe?" "Oh, do shut up with that babe crap Neil!" "Fine hear what?" both AJ and Neil said momentarily. "I hear it now!" replied Kaz. I jolted the car to a halt and then I quickly opened my door to see what was going on, and to my horror, Kenny was lying in the middle of the road a couple of metres behind the car. He was waving his arms around in the air as if he could not breathe! "Kenny, Kenny, he's ...he's...um...dead! I...I...killed...him" I stuttered, in shock. By now I was shivering, then AJ put his arm around me, to comfort me, or so I thought at that time. He brought me back to the car, where everyone were all shaken up and really stiff, peering through the curved windows in shear horror. They convinced me that we should not wait around, because no one saw and now no one except them, will find out. I felt assured and got back behind the wheel, after Mia , who had been quiet throughout the journey slowly came out with, "I knew it, I knew that this was going to happen, it was written in the stars." Even though she is my best friend, she does come out with bull sometimes, with all that superstitious nonsense that she believes in! ...read more.

Conclusion

After the forensic team arrived, about twenty minutes later they were able to come up with a full report. "I'm sorry to say, that we found some navy fibres attached to the front bumper and some very distinctive blood stains, which are of a person with blood type O, just like Kenny." `That was strange, because when we hit Kenny there was not a dent anywhere, what can you say, but the police ain't as good as they make themselves out to be.' Jinita Batavia Page 4 18/03/00 "I'm afraid you're under arrest." The PC said relieved that this case was over. And it must have been one of the quickest cases ever! "We'll have to take you down to the station; anything you do or say will be held against you later in court." Those lines were just like the ones you here on television programmes. Ah well, dad would not be confused about that then, unlike everything else, as he watches television twenty-four/seven. Now that that was over, I thought that I should celebrate. `Wow' I thought to myself, I never thought I could put someone, especially my own dad behind bars, maybe I should try it more often! In addition, I also now have an extra room, as well as a mum, so I am safe from an orphanage...for now! ...read more.

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