Kimino falls in love. They exchanged glances, he was strong, tall and handsome his hair was dark and lustrous, his eyes were blue and clear like crystal raindrops

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Miss Gabrielle

         The sparkling deep blue sky was scattered, as the sunlight was glistening giving a genial glow like fire. The feeling of peace and serenity over took Kimiko. She could hear the cries of the birds in the narrowing distance and the sound of the calm, still sea rippling its waves to and fro. The sky was an authentic natural blue-marine shade. Kimiko was dreaming vividly. She could not make sense of her surroundings. The dream kept fluctuating instantaneously; she was blistering hot and restless. Kimiko then pictured herself gazing into her bathroom mirror and she could see herself staring back at her own reflection cautiously. She saw her eerie and mysterious looks when she was nineteen, tall, slim and stately. She had cinnamon–brown eyes and warm brown locks that cascaded down her rear in ravishing waves. Time had shifted swiftly but she remembered the day when everything had changed.

   

     Beginning at Shun Ku College in early September, Kimiko was a popular and bright girl. Everyone loved her. She was just an ordinary girl like everyone else. It happened when Kimiko was rushing across the hallway accidentally colliding into someone. And fell on top of him. They exchanged glances, he was strong, tall and handsome his hair was dark and lustrous, his eyes were blue and clear like crystal raindrops he had a beige natural coloured tan just like café au lait and the glow of colour dusted in his slender cheeks. Kimiko became apologetic but he said, “No, its all-right, are you hurt?” Kimiko replied reassuringly. “I’m the one who should be asking you if you’re hurt.” He smiled at her. She helped him onto his feet she asked him curiously; “I haven’t seen you around, what is your name?” He replied, “Yukio.” She smiled sweetly and said, “My names Kimiko,” then she walked off turning her head back to take a firm look at him…

   

    A Couple of week’s later; Kimiko was making her way outside the college gates towards the bus stop. She stood there frigid and desolate. Kimiko was shivering; as it was windy and cold; she pushed a stray wisp of chestnut coloured hair off her forehead and looked around the bus stop. “I wish there was a telephone,” murmuring to herself. “Well there isn’t, and its five miles to the nearest town,” Yukio said as he appeared unexpectedly. Kimiko looked startled. “It s all right,” he said. Yukio offered to carry her bags and he said, “Come on five miles isn’t so far.” With one hand he picked up her bags and sluggishly started walking down the road. Before he heard the crunch of gravel she was following him. Kimiko sighed tolerantly. The one lane street was faint and deserted. It would have been pleasant being alone with him except she began to feel restless with every step; she was beginning to feel hungrier than she was before. Just as she was going to ask him if they could take a short break, she heard a car coming from behind and the engine was very intense and emphatic. A car passed them; there was a rattling of gravel and it came to a sudden halt. There was a young boy peeping out of the window waving at Yukio. Kimiko looked at him intriguingly. He seemed about Yukio’s age and he was intensely suntanned. He was sitting in the driver’s seat and he had attractive blond hair.  They both steadily sat in the car. Yukio explained to Kimiko that it was his brother Tadashi. “Nice to meet you,” Tadashi said softly. “So have you known Yukio for a long time?” Tadashi also asked. She explained to Tadashi that they had incidentally met one time but she never got the opportunity to get to know Yukio properly. Yukio interrupted the conversation between Kimiko and Tadashi and says, “How about you stay at my place then I’ll drive you back home.” Kimiko replied, “Sure! That will be fine.”

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      They finally arrived at Yukio’s house and Tadashi unloaded Kimiko’s bags out of the car boot and placed it in the wooden porch then said toYukio.“Do you want to take a walk?” “Sure!” he replied. Kimiko was getting very excited but she noticed something weird about his eyes, they were brown. It was hard to remember. She thought that they looked brown at one point- when they were both at the bus stop. But the day she fell into him in the corridor his eyes were a serene blue colour. That was very strange. They both ...

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