Little Red Duffle Coat

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Little Red Duffle Coat

        Once upon a time not too long ago there lived a widow and her daughter in a small suburban house. The little girl was kind and friendly, and everybody loved her, especially her grandmother (when she could remember her name). One Christmas her grandmother bought the little girl a bright red duffle coat like she had worn in her youth, and even though it was out of season and not smothered in logos the child wore it out of love. All of the neighbours would smile when she passed them in the street and call out “little Red Duffle Coat”.

        Now one day, little Red Duffle Coat woke up with the sunlight streaming through her bedroom window. “Today’s going to be a good day, I think I’ll watch some TV,” she thought to herself as she pulled on her duffle coat and skipped down the stairs. However, when she wandered into the kitchen to make herself some breakfast she found her mother slumped on the lino with a basket of food and an empty bottle of gin lying beside her. Her mother rolled her bloodshot eyes towards her and slurred

   “Yehgramasicegen. Tekerissfoodorahltanyeride.”

        Red Duffle Coat was used to her mother’s drinking, and translated her vocalisations as this:

   “Your dear grandmother has been taken ill again. Could you be a darling and pop around with this basket of food for her? I’d do it myself, but mummy’s feeling poorly today.”

        After mulling over this for a few moments Red Duffle Coat agreed to do this for her mother, as the bruises were still there from the last time she’d disobeyed her, and besides, grandma had Sky Digital, so she picked up the basket and skipped off.

        To get to her grandmother’s, Red Duffle Coat had to cross a big park. As she opened the rusty gate she noticed a strange looking man sat on a bench staring at her. He had big yellow eyes and seemed to be covered in grey hair, but she couldn’t be sure because he wore a long coat that concealed most of his body. Bravely Red Duffle Coat plucked up the courage to walk on, but as she passed him he called out in a growly voice

   “Little girl, would you like a sweetie?”

        Little Red Duffle Coat remembered being told somewhere not to take sweets from strangers, (which seemed odd to her, but probably made sense to someone else.) and told the man this. He looked thoughtful for a moment, then grinned broadly, showing a mouth full of pointed yellow teeth and, holding out his hand said:

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   “My friends call me Wolf. You must be the little Red Duffle Coat everyone says so many nice things about. Now we’re not strangers any more! Its delightful to meet you, I do love an innocent child.”

   “Its nice to meet you mister Wolf” said little Red Duffle Coat shaking his hand “but I must go now, my grandma is sick and I’m taking her this basket of food.” Because even though she was a little bit scared she remembered her manners.

   “Oh how lovely!” exclaimed Wolf ”and where does your dear grandmother live?”

   “Why, ...

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