Lord of the Flies - An Alternative Ending

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Bryan Tan        10P

Lord of the Flies

Ralph looked up. He knew he was imagining things, and that had to stop. He focused on the essential things in life. Pigs. Sharpening sticks. Killing. Ralph stood and, set with a determination to fuel his desires, he exited the cave. He had been living in the cave for the past month. There was nothing left on his body save for a loincloth and markings on his body. He had been different from the other people since discovering the power. The power to kill the remaining survivors.

Ralph walked down to the beach. The palm trees and sandy beaches were once a haven to the boys. Once.  Now they were just obstacles in a war for both sides. Since Simon had died, and Piggy had disappeared, the “hunters” were fighting a war against Ralph. But luckily, none of the boys had been brave enough to kill Ralph ever since that fateful night. Ralph closed his eyes and let his memories take over.

*****

It was dark that night. The boys had given up trying to chase down Ralph. Ralph had retreated to a cave, but he was too impatient to wait till the morning. He wanted to try to persuade the Hunters to change their allegiances to him. He was walking towards the sandy beach towards the rocky outcrop, taking his time, anything to delay persuading the hunters. His new found conscience was urging him along.
“Go, Ralph! You might never get another chance like this!”
“No!” Ralph cried!
The conscience retorted, “What happened if you were bullied by a boy? Would you go confront the boy, or run away like a coward?”
“This is different! These are boys, humans, like me!” yelped Ralph.
“Just do it. Get it over with.” The conscience insisted.
Ralph considered, “5 minutes only.”

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When he reached the rocky outcrop, Ralph decided to climb up the steep and potentially hurtful rock in secret for fear that the hunters would see him and not allow Ralph up to discuss matters. As he climbed to the top, the rock he was reaching for suddenly came loose and gravity took hold. Ralph prayed that the rock that hit the bottom wouldn’t make a sound. Luckily, it hit the waves and was dragged out by the tide.

As Ralph struggled over the top, he saw 5 spears pointed at him, like deadly stakes.
“Why are you here?” spat ...

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