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Malcom was shivering from the bone-chilling weather but his mind was with the spirits, he was trying to get to his dad whom had just passed away.

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  • Submitted: 25/05/2012
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GCSE Writing to Inform, Explain and Describe

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A Stormy Night

It was on a crazy stormy night, when Malcom, Jules and estobony sat around the old haunted, scary and quiet houses dining table in anxiousness, they were so worried to the extent that they were nearly not breathing. Malcom was shivering from the bone-chilling weather but his mind was with the spirits, he was trying to get to his dad whom had just passed away. Jules was walking in and out of the room with her brain thinking where could her father had hid the wooden stick which can end all of their lives in one second.

"Estobony ... Jules! Gather i have found the perfect way in which we can reach our father" Malcom surprisingly announced.

Jules stated " Tell us what it is. But it better be good enough because Egilis wont be able to use his magic anymore."

" We're all wearing a ring that brings us back to life ... " malcom said.

"Continue." estobony asked.

Malcom shouted out "one of us could drown themself into the pool and we could pull them up by that time they wouldve found a way to reach father

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