Marathon run-Speaking and listening/descriptive writing

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Adil Cader – Year 11

GCSE English Descriptive Writing Coursework

A Hard Effort

An ominous task looms large ahead of me.

The weight of expectation is on my shoulders. There is an unimaginable amount of self pressure created on myself to win. I have a desire to win, I want to win and that’s why I'm going to give it my utter best.

People said it was impossible for me to win this marathon, I was cruelly criticised that I was either "too short in size" or "far too young to compete". Although there was so much doubt on my participation, despite this I still remained as eager as ever to win the gold medal.

Blistering and blaring sun was pouring humid heat on me and there was a sense that I could possibly be a victim of dreadful dehydration. The sky was as clear as crystal, not a single cloud was in sky which suggested that I wasn't to be treated to the luxury of overcast clouds or any rain. I felt the atmosphere was pure purgatory; there was no sign of mercy shown as each step I jogged seemed eventually harder and harder. However, I still tried to remain in focus and stay as cool as a cucumber.

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There is still another taunting two kilometres left to run. I am ahead of the pack, first place, yet I am tired. The tar on the road was as hard as rough as gravel, the sweat was trickling down as it my head was a cloud, pouring out rain and my shirt was like soil, soaking up sweat. The sole of my feet were being hammered like a nail each time they came in contact with the ground. My leg muscles were aching, gradually my shoulders were dropping and my pace which was as a fast as a deer, ...

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