Murder Mystery

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Murder Mystery

The cottage was always quiet; the soft blue walls made it seem bigger than it actually was. Rachel had always lived there ever since her auntie died and left it to her. It was very remote, along a heavy-hedged back country lane, miles away from anyone else. Rachel returned from work one evening late and lay back on her sofa after opening the french windows to let the warm grass scented breeze blow through the stuffy cottage. She lay back; her long brown hair was released from its clip and hung over the arm of the sofa. She kicked off her shoes and lay back picking up the stereo controller from the floor and turning on the CD player which began to play the CD she had put in the night before. A relaxed song started up; it was her Stereophonics album. The song which came on reminded her of the previous night when her new man Steve had cooked for her then by nine the next morning he'd performed a magical disappearing act.

Rachel had been single for about a year and a half and now she was twenty-five and she'd decided she needed to get out and meet a new man after her and Andrew had split up. She was now working as a family law solicitor after years of training; her job had been the cause of the break up with Andrew. Doing the job she did she got involved with a lot of jealous ex wives whose husbands she'd help divorce them. This one woman called Silvia Ripley had attacked her and she had a restraining order put on her and she'd never bothered Rachel again. This was about the same time that Andrew got fed up and bailed on Rachel and funnily enough for one of her clients who had just been filing a divorce from her possessive husband and had been spending a lot of time at the cottage when Andrew was also living there. Rachel had never quite recovered from finding out about it because she had been with Andrew for five years and it came as a pretty huge shock.

Rachel had met Steve in a pub when she was chatting with Andrews younger brother Rob, Steve was his best mate. Steve was younger than Rachel by two years, he worked as a chef in a restaurant in the town. He was quite muscular built with short, black, tight curly hair and gorgeous dark eyes. Rachel liked him immediately and the next night when she was at home in the bath the doorbell rang. It was Rob; he'd come over for a chat. He knew she was home because all the lights were on and when she didn't answer the door Rob opened the letter box and shouted, "Rachel, it's Rob, are you okay?"

She sat up in the bath and shouted back, "Rob, I'm in the bath, the spare key is under the blue flower pot, let yourself in."

"Alright."

He let himself in and she got out of the bath and put on her night shirt and dressing gown (it was about ten o-clock) and went into the sitting room where Rob was sat grinning.

"What?" said Rachel.

Rob looked at her and smiled and said, "Oh dear Rach' what has happened to you, you used to always be out with all your mates on a Saturday night."

She looked up with a sad look on her face; "Your brother is what happened to me, you should know that Rob."

Rob and Rachel had always kept in touch because they'd always got on well as friends. When she broke up with Andrew, Rob had been a shoulder to cry on, which seriously got to Andrew and he got a bit violent with him.

"Yeah, but you have to move on Rach, he's an idiot to have done what he did to you and its been over a year and him and that woman didn't exactly last, it was all of a three month thing before she got back with her husband."

"I know Rob, but we'd been together for five years it wasn't exactly a little fling we had was it?

"Very true but he's an idiot as I said and you can do much better and that is why I am here."

Rachel looked at him puzzled, tying up her hair in a loose ponytail. Oh god here we go, this better be good."

He looked at her and smiled cheekily then said, "Well, I think you'll like it."

"Come on then get to the point."

"Okay, Okay. You know my mate Steve who I was with last night."

"Yeah."

"Well he thinks you are quite nice and he wants you to come out with us two next Saturday night with one of your mates."

Rachel was intrigued, she'd thought Steve was rather nice when she first saw him but hadn't really given it a second thought because he hadn't given her any signals.

"Really!" she said

"Yeah, do you like him?"

"Like is an understatement, he's gorgeous."

"Oh good well you won't mind if I bring him here tomorrow to meet you then."

She raised her eyebrows. "No I have no objections to that, but you know my best mate, the blonde one who laughs a lot called..."

"Ally."

"Yeah."

"I know, she came on to me at that party you and Andrew had that Christmas."

"Oh yeah, that was so funny, she's going to be here tomorrow."

"Yeah I like her, well we'll come around at about eight."

"Yeah okay, you're not going yet are you?"

"Yeah I don't want to interrupt your evening alone."

"Oh it really isn't as good as it sounds, you don't want to stay here tonight do you, it's just it is actually quite scary here alone and we haven't had a really good chat for ages."

"Okay, we can have a chat about Steve."

So Rob stayed the night in the spare room after they had stayed up until three in the morning talking.

The next day he left at about one and Rachel started to tidy her house before the others came round that evening. Rob was a good friend to Rachel, he checked up on her most days. He was very like Andrew in his looks; they both had short, light brown hair and bluey green eyes. They were both smooth talkers and could always make people smile. The only difference was Andrews temper sometimes when he'd had a bad day or drunk to much he would totally fly off the handle, which always upset Rachel and she was the only person who could calm him down.

Sunday night and Ally, Rob and Steve came around. Rachel clicked with Steve right away and Rob just sat their making Ally wet herself laughing all night with his filthy jokes. They all left at about midnight and arranged to meet at a pub on the next Saturday night for a bit of fun.

The week passed quickly and it was Saturday night and Ally was at Rachel's and they were both getting dressed to impress. Their taxi arrived at half past eight and took them to "Rezza's Bar." They met Rob and Steve outside but as they went through the big silver doors the first person Rachel's eyes met with at the bar were Andrews. He didn't look all together too happy and he was sat alone and he looked pretty drunk. She was worried about Steve because she knew what Andrew was like when he was drunk. They went over and sat in the corner of the pub then Ally and Rachel went up to the bar to get the drinks. They ended up right next to Andrew. Ally stood between them but it didn't work and when Rachel was walking back with the drinks he whispered coarsely in Rachel's ear, "You'll regret this, Rachel." She just ignored him and walked back to the corner and didn't tell the others what he had said to her. It did worry her and that night when she arrived back home alone she was so scared that she had to carry a golf club around with her. It was about four in the morning when she heard a crash from outside, she woke up with a start and sat up in bed petrified, she tried to move but couldn't, she was like a rabbit in the headlights of a car which was gradually getting closer and closer. Her eyes started into the darkness off the room her breathing became faster and faster and she was finding it hard to hold back the tears of sheer fright. She was sat up, dead still for almost fifteen minutes before she plucked up the courage to turn on the lamp next to her bed. She began to cry with her head gripped firmly in her shaking, pale hands. There was nothing she could do and noone she could call who wouldn't be fast asleep or drunk. She lay back in the bed with the light on; wide awake until it gradually got light outside. That night her and Steve had actually got somewhere, they'd chatted all evening and at the end she got a goodnight kiss and he arranged to come around to cook her a meal the next day. It became light and Rachel couldn't stay in bed anymore, she got out of bed at about quarter to seven and checked everything was okay. She sat watching television clutching a cup of tea in her hands. At about half past ten she decided to ring Rob and tell him what had happened and what Andrew had said to her. Rob told her not to worry and that Andrew wouldn't do that to her.

During that day Rachel had to work on a case about a man who was trying to sue his wife because she found another woman's underwear under their bed and torched his new car and broke his wrist with a tennis racket. It was confusing and she didn't have much information to work with. She spent most of the day working and then at seven the doorbell rang, it was Steve with a bottle of wine and all the ingredients he needed to make Rachel dinner. Rachel had cleaned the kitchen that morning which was lucky because later Steve told her he hated working in a messy kitchen and commented on how clean hers was. Rachel carried on working for another hour or so while Steve continued cooking away in the kitchen. At eight Steve came into Rachel's study and said, "It's all ready."
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They both ate in the dining room and the both talked, by eleven they were both shattered and slightly drunk. Steve couldn't drive home so he stayed the night and not on the sofa!

That evening Rachel returned home from work and dreaded spending the night alone.

A week or so had passed and Steve had been around quite a lot, Rachel was still working on her case and it was going really well because she was winning.

One Tuesday night Rachel returned from work and picked up the post from the doormat. ...

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