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My first date

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Introduction

My first date He was looking especially gorgeous that day with the sun bathing him in a golden pool. My heart began its usual fluttering as I walked in the class. Mrs Kirk had already started, "What's the excuse this time Heather?" "Pardon miss?" I said with the sweetest voice. I knew Ben would be looking round so I did a quick hair flick and smile. "Just sit down" I don't think Mrs Kirk fancied another "You've been in those toilets putting on make-up again" "No I haven't" "Yes you have Heather" ...... My seat was 3 desks in front of Ben so I wiggled past him trying my best to make my belly look flat and my bum look small. Glancing back I saw him looking, my heart nearly leapt, I mean Ben, Ben Sawyer, was looking at my, Heather Foxen's, bum!!! I was so excited I failed to notice the bag in the middle of the floor until I was lay, flat out on the floor at Mrs Kirk's feet. Why me? 10 minutes into the lesson Mrs Kirk was still talking about Pip being a tease and it not being fair on Estella. ...read more.

Middle

When I noticed that the door was ajar, the sheer relief that passed over me clouded my judgement as to who it could be when mum and dad were at work and Tony was at university. I can't remember now if it was seeing that the T.V was missing from the lounge or hearing men's voices coming from upstairs discussing which bed to take that made me call the police. But I suppose that's irrelevant now. After grabbing the cordless and running outside to the sanctity of the bush next to our house I told the police, in hushed tones, that I was in the process of being burgled and could they send someone really quick because I was really, really scared. Five minutes later (1 hours, 56 minutes and 19 seconds till Ben!) I saw 2 police cars speeding down the street, sirens blazing. Standing up from in the bushes, feeling a lot safer, I waved at the police cars that skidded to a holt. A few of the neighbours were out on the street, seeing where the trouble was. "Heather! What's going on?" I heard some-one shouting. ...read more.

Conclusion

Well, hopefully anyway. Minus 2 minutes and 13 seconds. Ben was late. Ben was never late. Minus 5 minutes and 25 seconds. What if Ben wasn't coming. What if this whole thing was just a big joke? Come to think of it he had looked a bit puzzled when I'd said, "Sure, see you then" At minus 24 minutes and 18 seconds I realized that he wasn't going to turn up. I'd been fooled. Probably by James, he was always doing things like that. I had just started walking towards the bus stop to go home and cry, when someone ran round the corner straight into me. I fell onto the floor, the contents of my bag lay next to me. It took a while before I realized I was being lifted up onto my feet, I opened my eyes to try and get my balance but what I saw before me knocked me right over again. In front of me stood Jack Groves. He was the Ben of his year group. Only he was older, his muscles were bigger, his looks were more rugid. And most importantly he was more interested in me. "Fancy going watching a film?" Oh. My. God. 2,061 words ...read more.

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