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Oliver’s Twist

By Jack Goddard 9.2

On the edge of London, was a compact housing estate with lots of children.  The houses were quite small but everyone knew everyone and there was a big green in the middle of the estate where the children could come together and play what ever they wanted.  Tucked away in the corner of Whinlatter Drive was the house of Oliver Bates.

Oliver Bates was a very unusual boy.  He was different in every way to his three brothers.  He was more interested in reading books and listening to old fashioned music on the radio than playing sports such as cricket; football and rugby like his brothers.  Each time they asked Oliver to play football he would nearly always say that ‘he was coming in a minute’, but never did or if he was watching wildlife programmes or autobiographies on the TV, his brothers would almost always change the TV over to a sports channel.  Only his Grandpa understood him. Oliver’s Grandpa lived in Scotland, miles away from London so he didn’t come to visit often but when he did he stayed awhile and spent time chatting for hours about all the things that Oliver enjoyed so Oliver would look forward to his visits.

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It was coming up to Oliver’s 9th birthday, a birthday that he shared with his Grandpa.  Perhaps that was why Oliver tended to be Grandpa’s favourite. His Mum and Dad were planning a surprise party for Oliver but the biggest surprise was that Oliver’s Grandpa was travelling all the way down from Scotland to the celebration.  They had always known how much Oliver loved his Grandpa.

A few days before the party they called up Grandpa and asked him if he could come.  He said he was feeling a bit under the weather but that he wouldn’t miss Oliver’s ...

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