My story:Love is Blind

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Love is Blind

Jeremy Gold's was no ordinary 25 year old man. Apart from being stunningly handsome with smooth flawless tanned skin, silky black hair and pumping red lips, he was also an agent working for M.I.5.

One sunny afternoon after a full English lunch at the Old Inn Jeremy came home from shooting down a helicopter containing terrorists and bombs. His home was just as un-ordinary as he was. From the outside it looked pretty normal but as soon as you opened the door you could smell the aromatherapy candles and pleasant but different smells of various countries . His house was exceptionally large, seeing as he had been the only person occupying it for the last several years. There was one room in his house which was kept hidden away and locked with many code and key locks, even a bolt! This was the attic. It contained confidential M.I.5 secret information.

He opened the front door and casually but cautiously strolled into the large square sitting room. He slumped down on the cream electric leather sofa signed and shouted "Gertrude are you here". No one answered.

Gertrude was his girlfriend. In more ways than one she was like him. She was young, a role model to others and her beauty out shone the sun, with her long pale blond hair and baby blue eyes. On the other hand she was far different from Jeremy. Gertrude was an old peoples' nurse who worked at a local residential home .Gertrude and Jeremy had been going out for 6 months now and she had moved in with him and had been living together for a month. Jeremy hadn't been that truthful with Gertrude well he hadn't been truthful at all. He had told her that he was an architect which explained for the large sums of money and going away to countries all the time.

He made his way down one of the hallways leading to the kitchen. On the table was a plain white tatted envelope not addressed or stamped. As Jeremy slowly cut open the flap, a small piece of paper fell to the floor. It had written in swerved joined handwriting ...
Join now!


Jeremy fell to the floor and perhaps for the first time burst into tears. As the hands drew closer to 3:05 and a single tear cascaded down his face the phone rang letting out a cheerping tone. Jeremy got up and answered the phone "hello", a deep voice replied immediately

"you've got half an hour" and then hung up.

Jeremy threw the phone at the wall and screamed. Initially he didn't know what to do. His mane priority was getting Gertrude back in one piece. However the book was far too important to hand ...

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