My Ultimate Dream. As a child I have always had many dreams and goals in my life.

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Aliza Sheikh 8A

My Ultimate Dream

        

As a child I have always had many dreams and goals in my life. I have now realised that I cannot always have what I want in life as it can then become too complex and complicated. I think this because everyone wants to aim for the best in all there dreams, but as we grow older we realise that not everything is that easy. I also think that we all have to be successful in order to fulfil those dreams in our lives.

A few of them include starting a career in business and succeeding in creating my own company. To add to this I also love to experiment with my surroundings and find out new things so that it can help people in their every day lives for example creating new inventions and medical remedies. Also I want to try and find new ways in which I can help nature and the natural world.

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I have been inspired to include these aspects in my ultimate dream because I find that I am capable of achieving these goals and I have a particular talent in them such as being able to manage and lead a group of people, in communication, working as a team and organization skills. Although I can do all these things I still want to be able to improve on them so that I am able to increase my skills and abilities.

Also I was saying that I wanted to create inventions, medical remedies and find new ways to ...

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The title is "My Ultimate Dream" but this is a random wish-list of musings and cliches such as ".. .never give up and keep persevering..." that barely amount to the "decision" referred to in the last paragraph. However it is, generally, a competently-written and well-structured essay 3 stars.