Narrative paragraph - the smokey smell of the fire mixed with the sweet smell of the orange reminded me of my vacation to the Florida keys

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        The other night I was sitting by my fireplace eating a naval orange, and

the smokey smell of the fire mixed with the sweet smell of the

orange reminded me of my vacation to the Florida keys over winter break. I

will never forget the fresh smell of the air when we stepped out of

the minivan. I couldn't wait to get to the beach and step on the soft, white, sand.

        The first thing I did was change into my bathing suit and run out to the

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beach. My family and I spent the entire day splashing in the salty water, until

we were too tired to keep our heads above the water. When I was tired from

all the swimming I would lie down on the soft damp sand and take a nap. It

felt so good to have the warm sun blazing down on me. My favorite thing to do

when ever I was bored was build gigantic sand castles on the beach. My

sisters and I would have contests to see who could ...

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