Notes for a speech on tattoos.

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Tattoos

General Purpose: To inform

Specific Purpose: After listening to my speech, my audience will have a better knowledge of tattoos.

Introduction (Tell them what you are going to tell them.)

I. As of 2010 there was estimated to be over 20,000 tattoo parlors operating in the United States according to the U.S. News and World Report article. It is also estimated that a new tattoo establishment is being opened in the country everyday.(Attention-getter)

II. Tattoos have been around for many centuries, but have changed over time in many different ways. (Thesis)

III. Todays I am going to talk to you about what a tattoo is, the history of tattoos, and the purpose and meaning of tattoos. (Preview)

Transition: First we are going to look at what a tattoo is.

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Body (Tell them)

I. What is a tattoo?

A.  A tattoo is a puncture wound, made deep in your skin, that's filled with ink. It's made by penetrating your skin with a needle and injecting ink into the area, usually creating some sort of design. What makes tattoos so long-lasting is they're so deep — the ink isn't injected into the epidermis (the top layer of skin that you continue to produce and shed throughout your lifetime). Instead, the ink is injected into the dermis, which is the second, deeper layer of skin. Dermis cells are very stable, so the tattoo ...

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The layout and overall structure of this essay are excellent. Historical facts are competently and clearly expressed. Clearly this was intended to be a presentation, in which case the annotation is useful and appropriate. However, it would not be required for an essay form. There are a lot of irritating little errors of grammar and punctuation that could have been picked up and corrected during a re-reading before submission. 4 stars