On a cold, windy day, Max was laying down with his girlfriend watching a movie.

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Sean Woll

English 115, Section 05

Professor Peter Mascuch                          

        On a cold, windy day, Max was laying down with his girlfriend watching a movie.

 

They were nice and comfortable laying there until Max heard a sound from the other side

of the house. He got up and told Jane that he would go check out what had happened.

When he reached the dining room at the opposite side of the house he noticed that a

window was broken and saw that a tree-branch was knocked down by the wind into the

window. It did not seem like a big deal to him so he cleaned up the little bit of glass then

returned to Jane. Upon returning he told Jane what had happened but she didn't respond.

She just sat there lying still; a little too still. He nudged her arm and her body rolled over.

Jane's throat had been cut and she was dead. Max went crazy. While still in shock he ran

around the house and checked each room but found no one. He ran for the phone to call

the police and just after he finished dialing 9-1-1 a sword cut through his neck and he fell

to the ground. The last thing he saw was a glimmer of masked man dressed all in black.

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As Max lay dying this man slowly hung up the phone and seemed to disappear from the

house.

        Nobody came to the house for three hours. It was Max's mother, home for her

lunch break.  She saw her dead son near the phone and found Jane dead in Max's room.

She called the police and within ten minutes detectives were all over the house. They

found no trace of a break-in and no clues as to how the assailant got into the house. Three

days later a simliar crime ...

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