One of the aim of this text from a narrative essay is to describe the hurricane. He firstly does this when he describes the hurricane as,

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Manna Khan

Mr Lewis

English Language

28/11/2004

Clash with the hurricane

The sky darkened from the blue light sky, it turned suddenly to a dark black gloomy sky hovering with a mist cloud. I walked back into the car, seemingly it was going to pour down. Heavily, the wind blew. I turned to shut the windows, but, as I looked closer out of the window, huge clouds started fusing together which then created a huge immense hurricane. I could not believe my eyes, a hurricane was coming our way. I could not believe it, even though this was so dangerous and could have many damaging effects to the environment and to the people, but from a distance it was such a magnificent phenomenon. Heavily rain poured, hitting the ground like bullets from a gun. Luckily for me, I was in my car.

I tried to start the car but it wouldn't work. I turned my head again towards the window, the death trap was seemingly getting even more closer. After many efforts of trying to start the car, the car would still now move.

'What a time for the car not to work I thought to myself'. I got out of the car and looked ahead. The treacherous whirlwind was closer than ever, people now started to notice and started fearing. At this point I was thinking only one thing, 'Those damn weather reporters never told us that a hurricane was coming our way!'
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I stood outside in the thundering rain waiting for transport but the hurricane was only few metres away. There was panic and distress in every soul, the cries of children, the frantic screams of mothers and the saddening wailing of helpless men. The trees wavered like a stand full of supporters at a football match.

People where running in all directions. I took a move. I was pacing quite fast, I turned around. There was the perilous typhoon. The hurricane was sucking everything in like a black hole. There were people behind me, and also in ...

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