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Original Writing

“He’s over there,” the butler said. A tall stoutly man, Alfred the butler had been serving the Parmigiano household for 25 years and prided himself for his loyalty, even though he disapproved of Mr Parmigiano’s reserved attitude towards him. In fact, Alfred didn’t remember a single word that Mr Parmigiano had said. The occasional smile or acknowledged glance, nothing untoward, but there was something that he could not put his finger on, he seemed to be silent too much.

Alfred motioned towards two mountainous doors; they must have been at least 15 feet tall. He knocked once, and heaved open the door.

“There is somebody to see you sir,” he bellowed.

Alfred turned to face a studious looking young lady behind him; he smiled to her and signalled for her to walk through.

“Thank you Alfred,” she replied in a mellifluous, well-educated voice, emanating a certain degree of power and respect and she strolled through. Thud! The door behind her slammed shut, the room was dark, no windows, just a lantern in the roof radiating enough light for make visible the surroundings. The room resembled more to a cupola than to a vestibule; the renaissance al frescos covered domed ceiling and in the cylindrical room six crevices each contained magnificent bronze statues. As she examined the room she heard an outlying sonorous sonata, pulsating from the room ahead. She edged towards another pair of elephantine double doors. She placed her ear on the oak door, the music acted like a soporific drug, lulling her into a trance, minutes passed and she was still listening to the music. Then all was quiet, the enchanting mantra of notes ceased, she knocked and the doors creaked wide open, surprisingly easy for doors of such size.

A huge window at the other side of the room flooded the cupola with light, spilling into every nook and cranny. It took her a few moments for her eyes to adjust to the light, but when she did, she found that the room was more decadent and extravagant than the one before. She stumbled in to the middle of the room, absorbing the grandiose furnishings. The colossal window at the opposite side of the room was framed by opulent crimson curtains, and directly in front of it was a huge black coruscating grand piano.

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An old man sat facing her, his eyes piercing straight through her, as he did, he transformed what appeared as a glare of warning into an embracing grin. She felt it obligatory to smile back.

“Hi my name is Victoria, I was told to visit you by my father, Richard Godwin,” she said. At the sound of the name the old man’s face filled with hatefulness and abhorrence, but Victoria continued, “he told me to give you a message.” She felt as if the sardonic atmosphere had disappeared, only to be replaced by an awkward silence. As she stood there ...

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