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GCSE – Original Writing Coursework

        By the time I had reached the top of the lane, the only lane leading away from the college dormitories, the air had started to chill with the onset of night. I allowed myself one final look. The colleges still looked big but had a hint of mystery and danger. Was it because I had recently pledged my life to the Phi Delta Nu sorority without knowing what it truly entailed? Was it because this was the first time I attended a ritual? I got a voicemail from Marie Haus, Rhea’s protégé; her message seemed cut off. As if someone had intentionally prevented her from conversing with me, ‘K-k-Kim, she stammered, get me out of here, it’s rhea she has gone ballistic’. Then a deep voice was mysteriously let out from the background as I could hardly understand was it said, Marie let out sharp piercing scream for help then the message ended suddenly, she sounded like she was in need of help. Towards the end of the previous year everyone was aware that Marie had begun hearing and seeing things, she was proven to be delusional. I tried not to concentrate to hard on what had just occurred seeing that it was probably a prank, so there was no need to look for help as I was already late as it was.

  Everyone arrived at midnight in their red hooded trench coats all the sisters of the Phi Delta Nu sorority came to the Backhouse Graveyard as instructed, Rhea our head sister looked at everyone and began to hysterically search for Marie her protégé. With today being the day in which she was supposed to take over the sorority, Rhea had been the head for 9 years thereby exceeding the maximum 5 year term. Since Marie was absent Rhea thought it was her right to continue directing the sorority but as it was a sisterhood it automatically led to an argument therefore creating drama and confusion. This was absolutely the wrong time to arrive as I was even late, so I snuck into the back of the line. I realized what the commotion was about and various thoughts were going through my head, should I tell them what I heard from the message I got from Marie? I was terrified and told a fellow sister what I knew as she blurted out the information to the sisters, and then when she was asked how she got her absurd information she pointed her stubby fingers in my direction. I told everyone what had happened and wanted to show them my phone with the message on it as proof to Rhea but the message was not there.

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I vividly remember saving it, I screamed in hysterical anger and perplexed knowledge of how the disappearance of the message, I felt like a liar and even the words that came out of my mouth seemed to make no sense. Rhea came walking towards me and glared at me as she looked even more horrifying in the dark, her blackish red hair shone and reflected the moonlight, she had a mischievous smirk upon her then she turned around and named me her new protégé. ‘What!?, I’m just a freshman’, I shouted, ‘Well you’re not anymore’, she replied looking even craftier ...

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