Original Writing - Building Houses.

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English Original Writing Coursework

Philip Sutton

23rd June 2003

Building Houses

There once lived three teenage girls who always liked to have a good time. They lived with their mother, a very old, fragile woman, who always liked to wear red. Once the three girls turned sixteen, the mother gave each of them £2000 to build their own house. The three girls were delighted and went out to buy their materials for their own houses and eventually have a house for the three of them to live in together. The first sister who was not bright went to buy sticks so she could build a house out of sticks. The second sister who was of moderate knowledge went out to buy wood so she could build her house out of wood. Lastly, the third sister who was the brightest of them all with an I.Q. of 150 went to buy some bricks so she could build her house out of bricks.

They all met up after they bought their materials for their houses on a hill, near a big, old, nasty wolf. At first they didn’t know this and they started to build their houses next to each other. They started tapping with hammers when they heard something awake with a big yawn. Approaching the window, nervously, they found a ladder in the nearby garden, climbed up this ladder and looked through the window. All they could see was a big, old hairy animal. They screamed and all climbed down the ladder as fast as they could.

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This big, old hairy animal came out of his house and asked, “What’s going on? Why is there screaming?” They screamed and ran down the hill. “A wolf.” said the third sister. They walked up as slowly as they could and got to the top of the hill 8 minutes later and saw the wolf standing outside of three half-built houses. The wolf heard whispers behind him and turned around very quickly.

 “What are these half-built-?” asked the wolf.

“They’re our houses in which we are building.” replied the second sister.

“Not on my hill.” said the wolf ...

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