Original Writing - John - We were outside someone's house and Dan knocked on the door.

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John

We were outside someone’s house and Dan knocked on the door. I’d never done a burglary before so I didn’t know what the hell I was doing. I didn’t really want to do this burglary either but if I didn’t, Dan would kill me. He’s just got out of prison for being involved in a car crash.

        Just then we heard someone shout something and then Dan made me break the door down. I was really scared so I counted to three and kicked the door down. I followed Dan into the house. He got a knife out of his pocket.

        “Dan what are you doing?” I asked. He looked at me and smiled.

        A woman about forty came downstairs. Dan made me stay with her whilst he went upstairs to rob a few things.

        The woman didn’t look that scared. She kept asking me questions about Dan and me but I kept lying to her because I didn’t want her to find out who I was. She went into her living room and sat down and waited. I followed to make sure she wasn’t doing anything.

        “Hurry up,” I shouted to Dan but I don’t know whether he heard me or not.  

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About ten minutes later Dan came back down and we were going to go when we heard sirens. Oh no. It’s the police. I didn’t care about anything but myself. I ran out the house and then jumped over the fence.

“Stay right where you are,” I heard a policeman shout but I kept on running. I turned around and saw a policeman chasing after me. I was getting very tired but I kept running. I ran round the corner and ran into a youth centre. When I got in there I hid in the toilets. I stayed there ...

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