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Original Writing - 'Oh my God' I shouted in total shock. My gorgeous brand new Lamborghini with tinted windows, mini-disc player and a subwoofer that fills up my boot was totally ruined!

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Original Writing 'Oh my God' I shouted in total shock. My gorgeous brand new Lamborghini with tinted windows, mini-disc player and a subwoofer that fills up my boot was totally ruined! I could not believe it. There was a big, smelly, black and white cow sitting on my bonnet. It was a beautiful hot sunny day and I was going to visit a good friend in the countryside, she owned a mansion with twelve bedrooms, ensuite bathrooms, 7 maids and all the cars you can dream of. Yep you guessed it she married a man who owned half of Tesco's and now he's dead. But there was one problem her house was in the middle of no-where that's why it took me so long to find it! It was lovely driving down the open road with wind blowing in my hair, my music pumping out of my car with no one screaming at me to turn it down, no one to be seen for miles and miles. ...read more.

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As the person walked closer I realized it was one of the maid's. She came to the gates and asked me who I was and who I had come to see. I told her that I had come to see my friend who lived there. She then slowly walked back to the house and stood by the entrance for a few minutes. She then walked back and told me that my friend wasn't in and that she hadn't mentioned any friend coming to stay. I spent half an hour trying to tell the maid that I had been travelling for 6 hours, but she simply turned round and walked back in the house. I couldn't believe my luck. I resulted to sleeping in my car! It was about 6 o'clock A.M. when all of a sudden 'bangmoo'. I jumped out of the car only to discover that my car tyres had been slashed and that there was a big fat cow sitting on my bonnet! ...read more.

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She wouldn't let me in but got the cordless handset and let me use it. I called the AA and told them the situation at first they thought I was a little kid messing around and wouldn't talk to me. I then called again and talked to someone else and they said they'd send someone straight out to me. I gave the phone back and said 'thanks' to the maid. I then went and sat next to the big fat cow on my bonnet for 3 hours till the recovery van came. This was one of the unluckiest weekends I had ever had. Instead of staying the night in a mansion I slept in my car and instead of driving home in my new car I had to get a ride home in the recovery van with a smelly old man who kept trying to make conversation with me. Munira Yakub 13th September, 2002 ...read more.

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