Original Writing Peice, Year Ten GCSE.

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English Coursework Original - Writing Piece

The Present

Grasping my coat tighter I ventured further outside, further into bitter and harsh sleet, trudging through the slush of mud and ice that seemed to coat the surface, wondering...how much longer it will take. It seemed like a lifetime already.

           

Gradually I emerged onto a road that was as desolate as the wilderness, I had no idea where I was or which way to go...I was lost and needed help. Counting my steps as I went I continued through the endless night, the gloomy and grim darkened night, where finally I stumbled upon my last hope...It was a phone box.

                                                                 

The Past             

A couple of days earlier I was happily asleep in my room, dreaming of my next adventure, wondering if finally I would run my fingers through the black mess of hair, smell the comforting aroma of true warmth, feel the energy flow through me and press my lips against his. It was all I had ever dreamed of...and I wanted it more than anything.

                                                                                                                     

At about 4:30am I lifted myself out of bed, softly placing my feet on the floor and crept round the hallway to the bathroom, trying not to stir the beast from its slumber. In the bathroom I neatly set my clean clothes on the edge of the bath, got undressed and stepped into the shower.

                   

Standing, soaking wet, I wiped the water from my eyes and slowly dabbed myself dry with a towel that was soft to touch. I slipped into my comfortable clothes that were the usual black trousers and MCR shirt and headed on downstairs.

                                                                                                           

I entered my kitchen and threw together a make shift, meat free meal. I felt a draft drift across my back, it gave me goosebumps and made most of my hair stand on end, it was the back door, wide open as if someone had come in. I shut the door and came back into the kitchen...I grabbed the food and went into the sitting room; I had already booked the tickets to Canada and was ready to go...well almost anyway.

                                       

As I gathered my belongings and all I valued I pondered on transport to the airport...how was I actually going to get there? I sighed in despair then remembered a friend that owed me a favour or two, my face lit up as I grabbed the phone and dialed the number. At first there was no answer but then they picked up.

                                                                                           

I hung up on them having asked my favour and given them reasoning, enough for why I was running away and delightfully they were willing to help. They took mere minutes to arrive so I ran out the door with my suitcase and hauled it into the back of the shiny black car. I had to sit in the front with the driver because the other passengers were to small to have got away with it...even though one of the shorter people in that car was the eldest.

Running away, I had to. Abuse. It was the foundations of my life and I needed to get away. The more I thought about it the more I realized how serious it was and I had a depth of sympathy for all those who suffer with what seems like a cruel and painful disease.

                                                                                         

It wasn’t long before we were at the airport saying good bye as I walk through the gate to board the plane and before I knew it I was comfortably seated on my own by the window, we took off and my journey had begun. I was on the plane thinking to myself, dwelling on memories long forgotten, how it use to be before he died, how heaven tasted...but now only scorning remains of what was were clinging to my mind, suffocating me slowly, like a rope around my throat becoming tighter as time goes on, its pure agony I felt at that moment and I kept it to myself, I wondered...would I ever learn and let go? Or will I end up killing all the goodness that crosses my path.

                                           

Setting aside such morbid thoughts I gazed out the side of the plane, staring into a starry abyss and then as the darkness took complete control I returned to inside the plane and lost myself once more in a book, the dark gothic tale pulling me in deeper, giving me a hunger to find out what pain would aspire to be and dampen there already withered spirits, I read on to uncover what wouldn’t unfold within its pages.

             

Then suddenly a lightness about me churned my stomach and made me feel quite queasy as if a putrid man had walked in a splattered substances that could burn your imagination, I started to feel like I was falling and my breathing pace increased, I shut my eyes but didn’t calm down, It felt like gravity was punishing me slowly. Dragging me towards an early and messy grave. I opened my eyes and stared out the window....my breathing started to slow and I felt a lot better knowing that we were just descending from the skies, for I was not falling as I had felt but landing in this flying tin can.

   

Slowly I stepped off the plane and quickly made my way through customs, past the shops, down the stairs and straight out the exit. Outside I found myself stricken and gasping for breath, it was so cold like the sun didn’t exist here, but I focused and slowly ambled over to a taxi. Shivering as I went, I consulted the driver on where I wanted to go and how much it would cost, he told me he would be delighted to take me there and it would be free, this shocked and puzzled me but I wasn’t going to ask, incase he changed his mind.

                     

I clambered out of the taxi awkwardly and thanked the driver greatly, as he drove off I started walking towards the towns center, I couldn’t believe it, I was there, me, finally in Kingsville. Further on I walked being greeted by every local I came across, it was like I was famous, as if they had seen me in the latest movie, and I felt like royalty. A dozen teenagers offered me gifts, thank you’d and directions to a house, since I had no idea where I was to go I let them take me there. They took me to a house as ordinary as the rest and gave me encouragement t o knock on the door, I did so and was soon welcomed in by a pretty brunette, she pulled me in and ran off into the other room with a gleaming smile on her face, and I followed.

                                                             

Standing in the doorway my heart skipped a beat; it was him! FINALLY, after all this time I had found my angel. The brunette talking to him smiled and pointed right at me, with that he spun round quickly and almost fell to his knees in tears, he was so happy, as was I.

                                                                   

He ran over and embraced me, holding me close, with no intention to ever let me go, it was a perfect moment. A perfect moment, one of those scenes only ever found in dreams, the only difference is that I was one who chose to follow my heart and my dreams, it has brought me all I ever wanted, and we were together, with our first touch, the perfect moment from my dreams became the perfect moment in my reality.

                                 

I was truly speechless, being able to finally touch him, feel his soul; it was overwhelming and purely addictive. Heaven, I finally knew what it was like and as he sat there gazing at me, staring into my eyes, it was heaven on earth. having him there sent tingles, warming, soothing tingles through my body that made me feel whole, for the first time in a couple of years, I felt whole again.

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That night the wind howled in anger and thunder boomed down around the house, I awoke in a state of shock and tried to slow my breathing, such a horrifying sound would startle those in comas, surely, but alas I was the only one alive with motion that night. I quietly made my way up the gloomy ...

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