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Year 9 GCSE Original Writing Piece

This is amazing! I’m walking home from my first date, with a real guy! The food was great, the film was really funny, the house was warm, but it’s getting late and mum is going to kill me. It was just so amazing, I just don’t care. Everything was perfect, more or less. I mean my date is a lot older. He also has a slight reputation for being, a slightly dark character. Then again everyone makes a few mistakes. He doesn’t mean any harm, unless he’s angry or if he’s upset. Sometimes if he’s disappointed, annoyed and on occasion when he’s happy. Anyway, the most important thing is that he wants me at the moment, and he’s with me at the moment, and meaning no harm to me...at the moment.

As I look up at him, I squeeze his arm and smile. He frowns. He frowns because he’s disappointed in me. I didn’t follow his rules again; I didn’t have permission to touch him, let alone hug him. I try to back off slowly, hanging my head in shame for disappointing him. What does he want now? I thought he didn’t want me to show signs of affection, yet he’s just grabbed my arm and pulled me,

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“Sorry…”

“No. Shut up you stupid naive little girl. It’s too late now; you know the rules and chose to ignore them.”

I made a huge mistake. I made him angry. I’m getting worried at the look on his sharp, twisted carved face. He’s hurting my wrist. I’m alone in a dark street, with his cold glowing face lumbering over me. I’m confused by his sudden charge of anger that now pulsates from his black heart, to his hateful hands. Hatred twisting his face to a small sadistic smile that curls his lips that once longed to kiss me, now ...

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