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Escape!

For some reason my head was hurting when I finally flickered my eyes open. As I brushed my dark hair off my face, a haunting silence entered my ears. I sat up to see the whole school packed tightly into the hall. There were so many of us. I always imagined that this many people could fit in here easily, obviously I was wrong. Lined up row after row were familiar people lying on the floor, their faces were hidden in terror. Next to me lay my best friend Lana; she was lying on her side with her back facing towards me. Her long light brown hair was hiding her beautiful blue eyes, as it covered her red lips. She was wearing a pini -frock similar to mine, as it was part of our school uniform; under her grey tights she wore her black shoes. We had always been friends for as long as I can remember.

I searched around the hall to see if I could find my little sister. At the far end I saw her, but who was that next to her. My eye caught the back of a long figured person, who was wearing a black leather coat with something covering its face. It had knee-high leather boots that were covered in mud. Who was that? Then it twitched its head to the side as though it had felt my stare. I ducked under my coat peeking over the rim. I saw him. In his gloved hand he held a phone. I couldn’t see his long face because it was covered in a black mask, however I saw his hollow eyes look at me. It made my body freeze in terror. I gasped in horror as sweat trickled down my forehead. Had he heard me? Seconds later I heard heavy elephant like footsteps come towards me. I closed my eyes holding them really tight, as I did not know what else to do; questions circled my head, had he seen me? Was he coming to get me? What am I going to do? My heart began to beat extremely fast; it felt like I was waiting for a train to run me over. I heard the footsteps getting louder and louder as he came closer towards me. He bent down and I felt his cold breath on my face. He whispered into my ear,

Join now!

“Yes. You’ll be the first”. In my mind I imagined smoke coming out of his mouth as he hissed those words. Then I heard his footsteps as he walked away. What did he mean? The first to be released I thought.

Suddenly there was a huge gust of wind outside and following it came a howling crash of thunder, it scared the hell out of me. A cold shiver ran through my spine. I saw a flicker of lighting almost blinding me. At the corner of my eye I could see red and blue lights flashing. It was the ...

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