• Join over 1.2 million students every month
  • Accelerate your learning by 29%
  • Unlimited access from just £6.99 per month

Orignal Writing Coursework

Extracts from this document...


The emotions got too much for her and she had to do it. It had been going on for years, 'The Outings,' well that's what their mother used to call them when I used to see my sisters carted off into different stranger's cars. From a young age she had been taught how she was to perform and to the standard she had to exceed. She had seen her sisters go through the same thing and as she was the youngest she only knew too well what was expected. Her first time came and she was nervous. It was only natural, but Caryn had a hard time concealing it. Her hands were clammy and no matter how much water she drank, her throat still stayed dry. Ever since their father had died when Caryn was only three, the way to survive was this. She had just had her 14th birthday the week before. That meant D-day had come and it was now her time to shine. She knew that preparation was the key to success. Her mother came in her room and asked her to sit on the dressing room table, so she could teach the basics. ...read more.


The man's stubby finger pressed the button for the radio, or what was left of the radio. All the buttons had popped out and had to be pressed hard to get them to respond. The station that came on played fast dance music that made Caryn's heart beat faster as well. The man turned the volume of the music up so that car's windows and seats began to shake. Along with this, Caryn's hands also began to tremble. Caryn sat uncomfortably in the car, still conscious of her naked flesh being exposed to the vulgar man sitting next to her. A hand came out of nowhere and stroked her face. The rough hands contrasted to Caryn's youthful face, Caryn clammed up as he touched her. Sensing this the man turned to the steering wheel of the car and shouted loud enough to be heard over the music, 'It will only be ten minutes,' whilst starting the engine. Caryn looked out window and before she knew they were in a deserted car park. This was the place it would happen. Her fist time and there was nothing she could do to stop it. ...read more.


She thought it would be bad and had slowly accepted the fact that it was going to happen. She had even begun to think it was normal and give some sort of justification to why it would happen. She would pretend all the other girls had to go through the same thing, a sort of test to prove their love for their families, but she had never expected it to turn out like it did. The overburdening body weight on top of her, the sweating and panting. She couldn't get the flashbacks out of her mind. The feelings of his hand, touching her. Kissing her. Over and Over again, like there would be no end. She hated herself, how could she let him do what he did to her? It was all her fault, it always was. With all these feelings not leaving her mind Caryn picked up the bottle, took a handful of pills and stared at them. Sitting on the bed with tears streaming down her face she knew this was the ONLY way out. She forced the pills down her throat with a gulp of water and fell backwards. She was helpless, as she knew this was the only way to get rid of all that guilt she felt and to go to a peaceful place, where only angels existed. Fryer-Original Writing Coursework ...read more.

The above preview is unformatted text

This student written piece of work is one of many that can be found in our GCSE Writing to Inform, Explain and Describe section.

Found what you're looking for?

  • Start learning 29% faster today
  • 150,000+ documents available
  • Just £6.99 a month

Not the one? Search for your essay title...
  • Join over 1.2 million students every month
  • Accelerate your learning by 29%
  • Unlimited access from just £6.99 per month

See related essaysSee related essays

Related GCSE Writing to Inform, Explain and Describe essays

  1. Creative Writing - "Emotions".

    The front seat was of the bench design, all the way across, with the fabric ripped and several chunks of padding torn out of the centre. The dashboard on the rider's side was cracked, a gap of near inch revealed blackness behind.

  2. English Coursework - Moral Dilemma

    The shadowy image became clearer and clearer when abruptly it hit me. It was she, the mysterious, but beautiful girl. I pinched myself, nope, I wasn't dreaming. She approached me; my heart began to pound louder than the music around me.

  1. Creative Writing Coursework : Guilt

    "Don't worry, me and him are history." If I'd known she wasn't telling the complete truth there, I wouldn't have gone and done what I did. In any normal, sober situation, I wouldn't even have called her over in the first place. I can't quite recall the rest of the conversation, but, as you can imagine, we

  2. Jaws Coursework

    The amount of time for each attack was different, the audience got to witness more of the 4th of July attack this may be because Brody's son was involved. He was linked to the main character and so creating more of an impact on the audience if Brody's family are at risk and this keeps the audience watching.

  1. Pure Innocence

    Mike skidded smoothly round the next corner, followed closely by one of the police cars, the other came round the corner a second later but much too fast and its black, rubber wheels skipped along the surface of the road until the car rolled over onto its side.

  2. Creative Writing Coursework : Armageddon

    Boran walked into the middle of the circle. The cheering stopped suddenly. Boran smiled, kicked off his shoes and took his tie off. He pointed to a stocky man from the crowd. Boran studied him carefully; the half-light made it difficult to see. From what he could see Boran saw the man had blonde hair; he had grey eyes and looked pretty strong.

  1. english coursework goal.doc

    Munez is wearin white which symbolises purity, hope and glory, while the opposition is wearing pure black which symbolises evil and struggle. This could have been portrayed like this to create a scene of struggle between a pure character fighting for his chance of glory against the blockade of hardship.

  2. Story Coursework

    "Get off me" I shout, "this isn't funny." He pushes me to the ground and puts his arms on me shoulders so I can't move. "Help me, Please help me." I scream as he pulls down the zipper of the jeans. "Shut up you stupid bitch!" He says in a quiet voice. "Help, help RAPE!" I scream again.

  • Over 160,000 pieces
    of student written work
  • Annotated by
    experienced teachers
  • Ideas and feedback to
    improve your own work