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By jade Ephgrave

After months of planning, weeks of rehearsing and hours of travelling, walking out of the door of the train station was a dream I’d been having for weeks. The excitement rushing through us all was about to explode. Seeing all the little children running around. The trees and buses look completely different to home. It’s Disney Land. We’re not just visitors for the weekend though. A parade, a dance show and back stage passes meant we were employees for the weekend.

 Walking was really hard. Especially after travelling for nine hours, mostly, sitting down, which meant the bottom of my back hurt and my legs were wobbly. Ignoring all of this, excitement was all I could think of. Hearing the screams of the people on tower of terror and seeing the famous ears of Mickey Mouse made all the stress from home just melt away.

        At the hotel, waiting felt even longer then it ever had done. We were staying at the Cheyenne hotel. It looked descent for saying it was a country and western theme. Bullhorns hung above the doors, hotel rooms went down streets of dusty roads, in old-fashioned buildings. It looked real… until you Saffy and Isobel running around chasing each other for a Nintendo DS.  Issy, my best friend and her sister, Saffy, are eights years apart in age but identical. Both stick thin with mousey blonde hair. They both have enough energy to run a marathon. Issy and Saffy always wear the same clothes, today they are in three quarter jeans, a long flowing top and white bowed shoes.

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        “Let’s go on this.”

        “No, I want to go on this ride!”

        “No, We’ve got to go on this first.”

The arguments Issy and Saffy have are unbelievable.

        “We haven’t even been given our passes to the park yet!” Was all I could snap After 5 minutes of their screaming down one ear and shout down the other by little children.

        The hustle and bustle of fifty people trying to get a room was tougher then we thought. Faye, our dance teacher, was sat on the step out side the hotel reception trying to sort out our rooms. You couldn’t ...

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