Our Day Out - a play written by Willie Russell.

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 Our Day Out Coursework                                          Victoria  Olubi

      This is a play written by Willie Russell. It is based around a school trip from the inner cities of Liverpool to Conway Castle in Wales.

This play focuses on the Progress class and their first outing on a trip with two teachers called Mr Briggs and Mrs Kay.

      The Progress class is made up of children aged between12-14. They are special needs children with learning difficulties, and are taught by Mrs Kay who is in charge of the trip.

This essay, concentrates on which of the teachers, Mr Briggs and Mrs Kay are best sited for the needs of the Progress class.

     The main pupil in which this play focuses on is a 13-year-old girl named Carol.

Carol is a poor young girl who is eager to attend the trip; she rushes to school with enthusiasm.

‘Carol rushes along the street wearing….

which doubles as a street outfit and her Sunday best’. (Scene one)

This quote indicates that Carol is enthusiastic to go to school on this particular day. The writer uses this description of Carol to show that she comes from a poor background with little wealth. We know this because she wears her school uniform every day of her life.

When Carol approaches the zebra crossing her conversation with Les, the lollipop man shows that children in this area are not normally enthusiastic to go to school.

Carol: ‘Agh ey, Les. Come on. I wanna get t’school’.

Les: ‘That makes a bloody change’ (scene one)

This therefore shows that she is eager to go to school because she has never been on a trip outside Liverpool before.

      On the coach in scene two, the audience can read that the children are not at all organised or well mannered.

‘Cries of Miss, miss, me mum said I could go, and Ms can I come if I haven’t got enough money?’

(Scene 2)

This shows that the children of the Progress class are impatient because they do not wait for her to finish talking; they throw questions on her at the same time. They are ill mannered because they show lack of patience and don’t use polite words when speaking to her. This is also proof that they are poor and speak with slang dialect. They are inconsiderate because they do not think about her needs or show respect for her.

This shows us the type of children Mrs Kay has to deal with. The children are demanding and stressful.

Mrs Kay moves a short distance after asking if they have paid.

‘She moves a short distance away and all the kids follow her.’ (Scene 2)

Her action in this scene shows that Mrs Kay knows the children very well.

She moves a short distance because she knows about the financial situations that the children are in. In this scene Mrs Kay shows she is understanding and in control of the children.

      Mr Briggs has a bad attitude towards other people and the children

Mrs Kay greets Mr Briggs ‘good morning’

He replies back to her begrudgingly. Then he immediately begins shouting at the boys around, telling them to move.

‘Come on, move!’

This is the first thing that he says to the children which gives the impression that he is pompous because he behaves as if he has authority over everyone around him. His shouting shows that he is impatient.

His behaviour contradicts Mrs Kay’s behaviour because he is not an easy person for the children to talk to, whilst Mrs Kay is open and kind. This would make it hard for the children to understand and communicate with him. Therefore he sets a bad example to the children by showing he is pessimistic.

The Head Master and Mr Briggs both have little trust in Mrs Kay.

‘I’d just like you to be there and keep an eye on things’.

‘I get the impression that she sees education as one long game’. (Scene Three)

This indicates that Mrs Kay has a reputation as being unprofessional, stupid and is considered a bad teacher.

Neither of them value Mrs Kay and act unprofessionally by talking about her behind her back.

Mr Briggs thinks Mrs Kay behaves motherly, rather than professionally.

‘Well… if the antics in her department are anything to go by… She always reminds me of a mother hen rather than a teacher…’

This comment suggests that he thinks that her behaviour is stupid and she is a bad influence to the children.

He believes that she acts as a mother figure to the children and lacks discipline. He is a teacher who believes in self-control and discipline whilst Mrs Kay does not.

Both Mr Briggs and the Head teacher believe that Mrs Kay is too friendly.

The Head Master has already predicted that the trip would be a disaster.

‘Well, anyway, just try and keep things in some sort of order.’

They have little expectations of Mrs Kay, which indicates that they are judgemental.

On the other hand they could be having this conversation because she has let something bad happen before.

      Despite what they say about Mrs Kay, in scene four she proves that she is a good teacher.

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‘ Come away from that road will you?’ (Scene 4)

This proves that Mrs Kay is aware of her surroundings and does care a lot for the children. Despite that she acts motherly, she shows that she cares for them and their safety.

Unlike Mr Briggs she shouts softly, which is another indication that she cares, she gently shouts at him and he responds to her.

This also proves that despite that she is soft and kind hearted, she can still control the children’s behaviour.

In scene four, we have proof that she is on the children’s side.

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