Personal Writing - Explosion.

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Geraint Paul Williams

GCSE English

Personal Writing Coursework

Explosion

It was the day my grandmother exploded. She was the first, it might have been because she was old, who knows?

        It was two months ago, and my friends, family and I went on holiday to a large castle in the welsh mountains. Castell Angau was its name and it was in “a very nice area” according to my grandmother. I brought Jean and Shorty with me, because I couldn’t stand a week with just the family, they would bore me to death.

        We drove to the castle passing a village called Cartref Meddyliol; the people there were very “odd” as my mother said. After leaving the village there was a long road surrounded by trees, all leafless, which was incredibly strange for it was the middle of July. The road went on for a mile or two and then we saw the towering walls of the castle, which was enormous. It had thousands of windows covering each tower and wing of the castle, It was dark, cloudy, the rain was splashing against the car windscreen, lightning smashed against the roofs of the towers and thunder rattled my bones. A large shiver ran down my spine. It was rather strange.

        We ran out of the car to get out of the freezing rain with our luggage with us. My father opened the large oak door, slowly, because it was so heavy. I was the last to enter the building. Suddenly the door slammed behind me for no apparent reason; I didn’t touch the door, then who did? I was being laughed at by Shorty and Jean, because I had given out a huge yelp and jumped about 2 meters forward. My family were far from laughing from what had happened, because my grandmother had jumped and fallen. I looked up at the cavernous hall; it was all painted red and gold with a large chandelier hanging from the ceiling, which was painted with pictures of cherubs, roses, angels, clouds, winged horses and a wizard in black. It looked as though he was out of place in the image, it was staring at me. I shivered. I blinked. I looked back, and the painting of the wizard was replaced with a painting of a woman dressed in a white gown smiling. I closed my eyes and ignored what I had seen, “It must have been a trick of the light,” I thought.

         I stared round the room, it looked so well taken care of but no one had been there in years, as my grandmother told me, there was not a single speck of dust throughout the entire room, not a single cob web. There were candles on the walls, which looked as though they had never been lit.  The paintings in their gold frames were very lively, children were playing, the sun was shining and they all looked merry and bright.

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        We climbed the stair case which divided into two wings, one east one west, my family chose the east, my friends and I chose the west. We walked up a long twisting stair case; we reached the top floor of the top tower. It was nothing like the castle below, it was dark, gloomy, with stuffed animals on the walls. It was dusty dirty, cob webs were on the walls, the paintings were of images of death, suffering and images of torture, hell and punishment. I didn’t like this area at all it smelt like dry rot, nothing like the ...

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