Persuasive letter to headteacher

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Persuasive letter

28 York Road,

Hastings

East Sussex

TN34 4HH

Dear Mr Jarman,

I am writing to you in regards to some of the school rules and systems I think need to be discarded or altered.

Firstly, I am rather displeased with the food supplied in the canteen. I have this negative opinion because I feel that you are making profit on the stock sold, and I don't feel this is fair on us, don't you agree? I feel that the price is unsuitable for all of the consumers involved. I understand that me saying that you must make a profit on your stock sold is out of the question because schools are not able to do this, but surely if the food is as expensive as it is for the quality is it, then you should seriously consider changing your provider. I propose to solve this vivid problem in school that firstly, you think over the money side to things, and then worry about the quality after. I feel that but solving this day to day obstacle for students, that more people would be encouraged to buy from the canteen.