Persuasive letter to headteacher

Authors Avatar

Persuasive letter

28 York Road,

Hastings

East Sussex

TN34 4HH

Dear Mr Jarman,

        I am writing to you in regards to some of the school rules and systems I think need to be discarded or altered.

        Firstly, I am rather displeased with the food supplied in the canteen. I have this negative opinion because I feel that you are making profit on the stock sold, and I don’t feel this is fair on us, don’t you agree? I feel that the price is unsuitable for all of the consumers involved. I understand that me saying that you must make a profit on your stock sold is out of the question because schools are not able to do this, but surely if the food is as expensive as it is for the quality is it, then you should seriously consider changing your provider. I propose to solve this vivid problem in school that firstly, you think over the money side to things, and then worry about the quality after. I feel that but solving this day to day obstacle for students, that more people would be encouraged to buy from the canteen.

        Equally important to the prices of the food is the portion sizes. I think that they are extremely small for the price they are sole for. I am not suggesting that you should decrease the price and increase the portion sizes, because I know that this is out of the question. But  one or the other isn’t too much to ask. As a result is would encourage students buy lunch from the canteen, consequently then it would be the schools responsibility to find a happy medium in healthy and unhealthy for sale. I think that this would be a great opportunity for the school to get noticed for the selection for food sold.

Join now!

        Thus, at the moment the variety of the food is rather poor. I feel that is the school were to get the balance in food right but made the healthier food more desirable looking that pupils would be more likely to buy healthier things. In conclusion to the canteen system, I think that the school should make great improvements overall and get noticed for the food they sell, and that but making small but necessary changes that we would be setting a good example and setting the standards higher for other schools locally and further.

        Another system I believe you ...

This is a preview of the whole essay