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Polly Curtis argues that the, Internet Generation has left parents behind. She informs us about how children these days spend six hours a day in front of the screen and how they have become so influenced by the media.

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English Language coursework Internet Generation leave parents behind Polly Curtis argues that the, "Internet Generation has left parents behind". She informs us about how children these days spend six hours a day in front of the screen and how they have become so influenced by the media. She exaggerates on how young people spend their lives in front of the television without giving any attention to their parents. To begin her argument, she uses, "Internet Generation leave parents behind" as her headline. She uses a metaphor which is very effective. This is because she wanted to show us how much devotion children have given to the internet. ...read more.

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Then she uses alliteration and a metaphor for example, "Building Barriers between parents and children". She is indirectly saying that children lost their social life with their parents and are not giving any attention to the people around them. This metaphor she used is; again, perfect to prove her point because the quote building barriers really gives the readers a clear picture of the separation between parents and children. She uses statistics to support her argument such as, "30% say they have a blog and 62% have a profile on a social networking site". She says this to make the readers get a sense of reliability because it clarifies that it is a fact. ...read more.

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Curtis does overstress on some level how children use the internet for a long period of time. She could have done a better job by using more shock tactics as a replacement of repetition and facts. Imperatives could have been useful to make the readers think they can do something to help solve this problem. To finalise, Polly Curtis has done a brilliant job in supporting her argument. This concludes her whole argument by making the readers feel the impact of technology it has left on the children. I strongly concur that teenagers do spend too long on the internet this includes, "Girls take game consoles to bed at night". This has became a vast issue and I contemplate it's about time that something should happen about this matter. ...read more.

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