“The faint rosy glow of the dawn is deepening to an angry red.”
At this point the lights would slowly turn red, representing death, blood and pain.
The audience think Hibbert is a coward, mainly because he tried to o home, complaining of neuralgia, when he was fine at the party, and he takes his time over everything he does. In Act 3 Scene 3 Hibbert attempts to delay as much time as possible before being forced to do up.
“He is a picture of misery.”
Mason manages to persuade Hibbert y saying
“I aint bin up in this part of the line. Don’t want to get lorst.”
Then Stanhope turns to Hibbert and says
“Cheero.”
Leaving Hibbert no choice but to go with mason.
When the Sergeant Major enters he is very out of breath. The comings and goings of characters causes a build up of tension in the small dugout, in turn making the audience fell excited and nervous.
The Sergeant Major informs Stanhope that only Corporal Ross has been hit and that the attack is very much in full flow. The pace of the conversation is very fast, displaying to the audience a definite sense of urgency. It also shows the nervousness of both characters.
Stanhope checks that there has only been one injury so far, showing his concern and comradeship between fellow officers and men.
Comradeship is a theme carried out throughout the play, mainly upon Stanhope’s shoulders.
When the word “stretcher bearers” are shouted for the second time, Stanhope and the Sergeant Major look at each other as if they know what is running through each other’s minds. This indicates to the audience that both characters are expecting the worst, therefore so must they.
The Sergeant Major goes into the trenches to find out who has been hit whilst Stanhope prepares himself for battle.
“Flying fragments of shell whistle and hiss and moan overhead.”
The tension mounts as the audience waits in anticipation to see if the Sergeant Major returns, and if so, with what news.
“The Sergeant Major reappears and comes hurrying down the steps.”
Stanhope immediately turns to see what is wrong, showing true compassion for his colleagues.
When the Sergeant Major informs Stanhope that it is Raleigh who has been injured, Stanhope is shocked and requests that he be bought into the dugout. The Sergeant Major fights off this action by questioning Stanhope in disbelief, but Stanhope makes it an order, so the Sergeant agrees.
On hearing the news about Raleigh, the audience feel sorry for him because in the previous scene Raleigh thought the raid was all “Frightfully exciting.” This just illuminate show naïve and innocent he is to the audience.
In the final part of the scene, we see how the relationship between Stanhope and Raleigh is more than just professional. As Stanhope hears of men getting wounded, he acts calmly and plans the best course of action to help them, but when he hears of Raleigh’s injury, he is affected by his friendship with Raleigh, and orders him to be bought down to the dugout.
The stage directions in Act 3 Scene 3 intensify towards the end because there is more going on in this scene than in the previous scenes. When the words “stretcher bearers” are shouted from the trenches, the Sergeant Major leaves the dugout, leaving Stanhope alone. Here Stanhope shows signs of anticipation because he starts to prepare to go up in the trenches, as he waits for Sergeant Major to return.
When Stanhope is alone for the second time, he shows concern and comradeship for Raleigh by laying out his own blanket for Raleigh. When the Sergeant Major returns “carrying Raleigh like a child in his huge arms”, Stanhope has a blanket ready and tells the Sergeant Major to lay him down. The stage directions refer to Raleigh as a boy. This shows Raleigh’s youth. Then the Sergeant Major “Draws away his hands, looks furtively at his palms, and wipes the blood on the sides of is trousers.”
This stage direction shows the audience that Raleigh is injured and bleeding.
The silence is held for as long as possible before the audience begins to get restless. This builds up tension of the play for the audience. R.C Sheriff brings the raid to life by using sound affects; this means the audience will have to use their imagination to picture what might be happening outside the dugout.
The stage directions at the end of Act 3 Scene 3 are very emotionally charged. R.C Sheriff refers a lot to the candle at this point, because the candle being lit is a symbol of life.
Stanhope and the audience feel sorry for Raleigh as his life is slowly nearing an end. When Raleigh dies, because he was so young, the audience and Stanhope think it is a waste of life, and he didn’t deserve to die in pain.
At the end of the play
“The shelling has risen to a great fury”
As Stanhope is leaving the dugout for the last time, the candle
“Burns with a steady flame”
And Raleigh lies in the shadows.
“Suddenly a shell bursts on the dugout roof and the timber props of the door slowly cave in.”
The passage into the trenches has been blocked, entombing Raleigh’s lifeless body. The candle, which has been a symbol of life and hope throughout the whole play, is stabbed out by the shock, ending the hope and life the soldiers had.
The audience knows that hope for the soldiers is now gone, and they assume that the rest of the company is going to die. The audience may assume the soldiers will die because their journey is coming to an end, hence the title.
I think this scene is very emotionally charged for Stanhope, with the deaths of Raleigh and Osbourne, who died in the previous scene. He shows true compassion for his company, he has relationships professionally, and personally with them.
Comradeship is a theme that is carried out throughout the whole play because all the soldiers are very close, mainly because they have to spend all their time with each other.
All the characters in Journeys End have very different roles. Osbourne plays the father figure, the rest of the company look up to him as one they can turn to. Hibbert is the scared child because he is scared of what is going on. Trotter is the dark figure; he shows no emotions to anything, we don’t really get to know anything about him in the play. Mason plays the relief figure, because he is always there to lighten the moment when there has been an argument. Raleigh is the youth of the company, he doesn’t have any experience compared to the rest of the characters, and he thinks it’s all a game. Then there is Stanhope, he is the hero of the company, but he is scared underneath.
The structure of ‘Journey’s End’ is to have many conversations between the different characters, before and after each progression of the plot, such as an attack. The effect of this is to build suspense and expectancy before action and emphasise the repercussion of battle after the event, it also shows to the audience that most of the time would be spent waiting for something to happen, and then when it did it would be over fairly quickly. The audience being an extension of the stage means that they get to experience the waiting and suspense, more than if they were separate to the stage.
The plot in ‘Journey’s End’ is to show the depressing inevitably and intense waiting of trench life. The audience know that the big attack is coming and it is most likely that most of the characters are going to die. However, this inevitability is not a bad thing because it builds a sense of expectancy, therefore adding suspense- the audience will be waiting for the inevitable things to happen, just like the soldiers in World War I were. ‘Journey’s End’ portrays to the audience how the soldiers would know that they could die any day, whether it was from a sniper, or in an attack. Everyday would be the same with the main emotional factor being boredom due to the intense waiting.