17th January 2009
Verone Times
Yesterday, in Verona, in the hot hours of the afternoon, a fight
occurred ending in the murder of Mercutio by Tybalt.
Two gangs - the Montague’s and the Capulets - found themselves face to
face with each other in the streets of Verona. The two families are
well known because of their huge grudge against each other that has
been going on for years.
Why the fight broke out!
The reason, supposedly, for the fight was that there was an annual
masked ball of the Capulet and Romeo crashed it. A member of
Tybalt's family says they overheard a conversation where Tybalt said
he 'swore revenge against Romeo'.
Romeo, a Montague, Tybalt a Capulet mainly fought the fight, along
with a friend of Romeo's - Mercutio. When asked who started the fight
Benvolio answered, 'Tybalt, here slain, whom Romeo's hand did slay.'
Mercutio was the first man to be killed in this tragedy that started
as a hating between the families
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