She let herself in through the brown oak door. It was nice and warm inside. The fire lit up the large room making it glow with life. She put her soiled hands into the pocket of her thin green jumper. She could feel it

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        She let herself in through the brown oak door. It was nice and warm inside. The fire lit up the large room making it glow with life. She put her soiled hands into the pocket of her thin green jumper. She could feel it, nice and cool, in her warm bony hands.

        She started to go into her room, when a huge figure loomed ahead of her.

        ‘And where do you think you’re going?’ inquired the person.

        She looked up to see the red hot face of her mother, half-smiling, half-angry.

        ‘Go and get cleaned up,’ her mother ordered.

        She nodded her head and rushed off towards the small section of the house that was supposedly called the bathroom.

        After scrubbing herself clean and getting rid of the muck and cow dung on herself, she looked like a porcelain doll, dainty, fresh looking and with perfect features.

        She walked up to her bed. It was huge and had clean white sheets. She and her sister Maria shared the bed.

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        She lay her clothes down carefully on her side of the bed. She was sure to take the baby’s foot out of her jumper and hide it under her pillow.

        She recalled what Michael had said. What if there really was a crazy man roaming the long dark streets at night, hiding in the dumps or narrow alleys, waiting to jump out on an unsuspecting person.

        She shivered at the thought. Sometimes she let herself get carried away with her wild imagination. Her theory was most probably right. A child could have stolen the knife and cut off a dolls ...

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