Short Story - Suicidal Tendencies

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Suicidal tendencies

Jamie stepped into the betting office and instantly a warm blast of hot air hit him and the stink of unwashed bodies and cheap deodorant overpowered his nose so that was all he could smell. He made his way through the smoky haze of cigarette smoke towards the betting counter carefully moving round the leather sofas and chairs and trying not to step in any chewing gum or a half eaten chocolate bar. The guy at the desk looked up at him through the glass and asked, “Can I help you sir?”

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“I’d like to place a bet please” he stated

“Name please” the man at the counter asked and as Jamie replied he tapped it into his database “We’re sorry but we’re afraid we’ve found a problem” he whispered quietly

“What kind of problem?” Jamie asked nervously

“Perhaps you’d like to come round” he said, opening the door to his left as he spoke and ushered Jamie into the managers office. As the door closed behind him, Jamie took in his surroundings; he was in a large office with a 32-inch plasma screen at one end, a comfortable looking sofa on ...

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