Should the animals be used for scientific research?
Due to the inexorable advancement in the medical field, the world is becoming more and more dependent on animal testing to ensure that the new medicines which are being produced on a daily basis are of benefit to humans and do not possess any negative side effects. In my opinion, animal testing has a vital role in facilitating the advancement of medicine, and therefore is essential for us humans.
Despite the notorious publicity that animal testing possess, I think that its advantages overweight its disadvantages. Animal testing had contributed to the genesis of vaccines for numerous diseases such as malaria, TB, polio, asthma…etc and consequently saved millions of lives.
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A good case is made here for the use of animals for drug testing. However the essay is rather short for a GCSE submission. More use of the "some critics say" strategy of paragraph 3 could be employed and there could be some actual case histories. Also, more could be said about how the animals are treated generally. There is a sprinkling of grammar mistakes, particularly verb agreements. 3 stars