Sister sorrow

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Blackfen school for girls                                                           Shabrina Ali 07/05/2007

                        GCSE English coursework original writing:

                                      Sister sorrow

I was an idiot. How could I have been so horrible? I realised she was not her self anymore. The once jolly bright girl was now a fragile, weak person whose world had fallen upon her. I walked slowly to the glass window. I slowly pressed my fingers on the transparent frame. There I saw my little sister with wires connected all around. Her eyes were firmly shut. She looked as pale as a ghost.

I walked up to the door and twisted the knob slowly. I walked in. Slowly at a foot at a time. I walked up to her and dropped myself beside her. I instantly cried. The tears dropped upon the white sheets. I thought of all the evil things I did to her. Tears trickled slowly down from my cheek. It was then I remembered my parents talking. I didn’t quite know of what exactly of what they were talking about. It had appeared to me that they were muttering about someone. They were saying that the person was not going to make it. I remember hiding behind the door and glancing around. I didn’t understand anything, who were they talking about and who wasn’t going to make it? It was only a couple of days ago that I didn’t understand the full story of what had happened. I had been away on my school trip until I got a emergency call telling me I had to go home. In my head I prayed that nothing serious had happened. I went home and found loads of people in the house. I realised something serious had happened. Everyone bustled around the house making a fuss, but yet no-one told me what had happened. Instead everyone was telling me to be strong but I didn’t know why I had to be strong. It was then I saw my parents. Neither my Mum or Dad said nothing but instead took me to the car.

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The door had opened and I clicked back to reality. I quickly wiped the tear upon my face and turned around. There I saw my family. Their eyes were burning red. In my head, I didn’t understand fully what had happened. All I know was she was lying restlessly on a small cramped bed.

The doctor from behind walked in with a bulky brown folder and glimpsed inside the folder and he looked up with an expression no one understood. He coughed briskly and said slowly, ‘Can we talk outside please.’ They walked outside and talked for several minutes. ...

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