Sleeping Terrors

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Sleeping Terrors

As soon as they woke up they knew it was going to be hot. However there was still that freezing chill in the air that they had noticed ever since they stepped into this strange, spooky castle.

Yesterday seemed an age away. It had all been like a dreadful nightmare.

Laura and Scott, two teenage lovers, had been walking on the cliffs by the sea on that evening when they were stopped by a strange looking girl. She looked about the same age as them. She had masses of black hair, flashing eyes, long full-embroidered skirt and a gypsy shawl. She looked as if though she had just stepped out of the last century.

She had stopped in front of them, her eyes wild and laughing and had pointed in mockery at their clothes. She said, looking at Laura's jeans, "Why are you not wearing a skirt? Why are you dressed like a boy?" Laura was embarrassed and did not know what to say, but Scott kindly intervened by saying that it was usual in this day and age for girls to be wearing jeans. The strange girl looked totally puzzled by the term 'jeans' and both Laura and Scott realised with a shock that she did not know what jeans were. Their curiosity aroused; they asked her where she came from.

She pointed high along a cliff-edge to where they could see the outline of an incredibly scary-looking castle and were astonished when she said, 'I live there.'

They did not believe her but she was adamant and insisted that they come with her to see for themselves.

'My parents are sleeping;' she said, 'and I'd love to have you come to keep me company. It gets lonely during the days while they're asleep.'

They followed her along a narrow path that skirted the cliff top edge. At times it got terrifyingly narrow and Laura panicked inside, every-time she caught sight of the crashing sea on the rocks below. Scott put out his hand to reassure her from time to time as she quavered dangerously every time she stopped in fear. Eventually, the path led away from the edge and grew under until suddenly, around the next bend, they saw the castle, immense, forbidding and even scarier-looking close-up, than from a distance.
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Inside it was extremely cold. From the heat of the outside, the change in temperature was a shock and somehow they did not seem to be able to get warm, no matter how they stamped their feet and rubbed their hands and pulled their jackets closer round their necks. Surprisingly it wasn't just the cold air that made them uncomfortable. The whole atmosphere was damp and depressing.

'It's like Dracula's castle,' Laura whispered to Scott and the strange girl, as if having ears like a bat was startled at these words. She led them to a huge ...

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