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Something that changed my life.

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Something that changed my life. The significance and intensity of a single word can be beyond imaginable. A word used correctly in a sentence can emphasise different aspects of your life. This can give you the power to look at things close up and magnify faults to help you understand what needs to be altered to achieve the lifestyle you'd always dreamt of. I never thought a word that my friend who dropped out of school came up with would change my perspective on life. I was proved wrong. The British sun was beating down on my head; I could feel the heat through the window. The traffic was hectic; I was stuck on an overcrowded number thirteen bus on the way back from a session of shopping. ...read more.

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I stopped and stared; my heart was beating faster than ever. I scanned him from head to toe, Dolce and Gabbana hooded jumper, Valentino trousers and Nike Air Max's. I was stunned. "Wha gwan David" "Damn how'd you know my name?" To tell the truth I didn't know him, but I felt the urge to get to know him. My pulse must've dropped drastically as just walking by his side gave me a sense of comfort. In our in depth conversation we had a level of understanding I'd never experienced with a boy before. I spoke to him like I knew him, like he was an old friend instead of some stranger. We'd been walking for twenty minutes when I found myself looking at the spot where I'd first laid my eyes on him. ...read more.

Conclusion

"You need more, you could be a great girl. You need it so much, you could flip your life at a hundred and eighty degrees angle." We were walking back to the bus stop and I reconsidered what he'd said to me, if I had more confidence maybe I'd be happier. I visualised myself walking with pride. I felt better already. The British sun was beating down on my head through the window. The traffic was hectic; I was stuck on a number thirteen bus. I closed my eyes reminiscing the times that I stared at my reflection in the mirror "You look beautiful!" I wish I'd have said that and I wish that I'd have looked at myself, thought highly of myself and had a bit more confidence. I took a glance out of my window knowing a miracle had come my way. ...read more.

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