Tension building essay.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                              She was too scared to close her eyes in case the remainder of daylight, that was being slowly drained away, was completely lost from the room. Grasping her knees up close to her chest she began questioning herself,” where are they?”

                                                                                                            Outside the now eerily quite room the worn branch of an old oak tree beat against the window pane; the soft tapping became almost comforting to her. Again and again the gentle drumming came soon she was no longer afraid to close her eyes and slowly fell into a deep sleep.

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                                                                                                               The wind roared; dark clouds approached the window and as the small girl slept her breath, icy cold, became a misty swirl surrounding her. Daylight finally lost the fight and once again darkness engulfed the room.

The raging wind was no longer able to continue unnoticed and as it buffeted the window the fragile child awoke. Unlike before she wasn’t comforted by the light wind or soothed by the sound of delicate branches; the wind was now violent and the branches now scraped against the window.

All the shapes in the familiar room now became sinister ...

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