Terror In The Woods

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David Jones                Unit 2 (English)              October 10th  2001

Writing to explore, imagine and entertain

Terror In The Woods

It was beautiful day; the sun was shining a beautiful rusty yellow and the birds were singing their sweet high-pitched songs. My dad and I were going out. We were going to buy me a brand new bike. I had been saving up and have therefore managed to save myself one hundred and fifty pounds.  

        We were going to a Raleigh store in Nether fields which was supposed to be the very best in our area for bikes. A friend of my dads had highly recommended the store to him.

        It took about half an hour to get there but when we did the vast variety of bikes were fantastic. This was a bike lover’s dream. Row upon row of bikes from one hundred to five thousand pounds. As soon as we walked in the store a short friendly looking shop assistant approached us, “Hello,” he said with a large grin on his face, “how can I help you?”

        “We are looking for a bike for my son here,” my dad replied.

        “Okay,” the man paused for a split second then said, “what sort of bike were you thinking of?”

        My dad then jumped straight in quoting a German sounding name. “ We saw it on the television, and it said that it was a multi purpose bike and this is what we want.” My dad and I followed the shop assistant to the rack of bikes that we has suggested.

        “These are the ones sir but,” he paused.

        “Yes,” my dad said before he had the chance to continue.

        “Well to be honest I’ve never sold one of these bikes to anyone over the age of twenty,” he replied

        As the shop assistant was speaking another bike had caught my eye. A Raleigh Max Auto with 18 gears and grip shift. ”Dad,” I said rather loudly catching the attention of a few children passing by.

        My dad and the shop assistant strolled over.

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The shop assistant spoke first “Now this is another very popular bike for teenagers”

        “And the price,” my dad asked inquisitively.

        “Oh, well its one hundred and seventy pounds,” the man smiled and continued, ”Is this a problem?”                        

        A frown appeared across my dads face “Yes, he only has one hundred and fifty pounds to spend.”

        “Well,” the man was silent in deep thought, ” I suppose I could go down as far as one hundred and sixty but no less.”

        My dad paused “Ok,” he said, “would it be ok if David tried it out.”

        “Of ...

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