Text Transformation - Popular children's Nursery Rhyme in the style of Mills and Boon - Love on the Black Hill.

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Year 13 Coursework - Text Transformation - Popular children's Nursery Rhyme in the style of Mills and Boon

Love on the Black Hill

Jack elegantly glanced upwards at Mount Noir. He briskly brushed his golden locks away from his eyes and gazed in amazement at the beauty of the French Alps. The snow blanketed the mountain in front of him and the trees added to the picturesque colour contrast. Excited, Jack rapidly made his way to the mountain all the time anticipating the speedy ski to the bottom. However as he approached the base of the hill nothing could prepare Jack for the stunning sight before him. Jack was a rich successful businessman. He was good looking and charming. The only thing he wanted for was a lady to share his life with. Jill fitted the bill. She had it all. From head to toe she was every mans dream. Long flowing brown hair tantalisingly resting on her petit shoulders. Inviting green eyes, soft Mediterranean skin and a sumptuous figure. From the instant Jack laid his broad blue eyes on Jill he craved her body. Desperately he sought a reason to speak to her. "Its amazing isn't it?" Jack said nervously. He pointed up to the mountain to refrain from confusing the object of his desire. "Yes, its exquisite" Jill replied. Her response immediately showed Jack she was clearly on his intellectual level, and her soft, feminine voice enhanced his lust for Jill. She briskly turned to face Jack. Instantly their radiant eyes met. The chemistry between the two was bewildering. Breathing deep to ease his worry Jack asked, "I'm going to the top, I was wondering if you'd like to join me?"

"Sure, I have nothing better to do. Besides I've never been in a cable car". Jill loved to play hard to get but Jack revelled in the chase. "Oh I can show you many firsts!" Jacks witty humour almost embarrassed a usually confident Jill.

Jack brushed the snow from the seat with his broad hands. He gently grasped Jill's hand and lifted her into the cable car. He was the gentleman she longed for, he knew all the right moves. "So tell me your name, tell me about yourself." Jack inquired. "My name is Jill, I'm here on vacation and I made my fortune in the fashion industry." Jill replied fearlessly.
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"Ooh an independent woman. I like that." Jack said. "So any significant others?" he muttered. "Do you think I would be sat in a cable car in the French Alps with a handsome stranger if there was?" Jill stated with a swagger. "Jack and Jill eh? Has a familiar ring to it. Wouldn't you say?"

"Try Jill and Jack. I'm an independent woman remember!" Jill was making a valiant effort to prove to Jack that she could compete mentally with him. Both knew what was happening. Their need for each other was boiling over and the attraction ...

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