The Beast of Hamilton Creek.

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Raymond Broderick.

Bower Park school.

English coursework.

Original writing.

The Beast of Hamilton Creek.

Seeing the forest through the thick mist sent a shiver of fear down Mark's trembling spine. He walked alone. Alone down a very narrow country lane surrounded in cold air, thick mist, and over grown thorn bushes.

The full moon above him would occasionally disappear then reappear, as thick grey clouds would roll past, casting shadows over him. His breath was warm against his freezing face, and his heart thudded his broad chest with each slow stride he made.

He squinted, staring in all directions through the thick mist, trying to the best of his ability to make out the mysterious shapes and outlines of the things around him.

He was so afraid. Afraid as he knew the rumours of the creature that had killed so many people over the years. A creature unknown to scientist. Unknown to anyone except the unfortunate people who had encountered it including his own father, and for the lucky hunters that managed to escape it.

Mark tried hard, very hard to forget the blood and cuts that he saw on his father’s corpse that night, but he couldn't. The bloody images stayed in his mind reminding him of the scene everywhere he went. Those pools of blood, those red paw prints as large as an adults hand and those teeth marks. Large teeth marks all over the body. This made Mark feel a great pain inside, but he was determined. Determined to track down and kill this beast at all cost he just had to do it.

Suddenly he heard a growl. A menacing, familiar growl that the creature made. A growl that reminded Mark some how of a fierce bear ready to attack its prey. His heart now beating faster shuddered, casting a queer feeling over his body. He listened, and then turned. It was there, before his eyes. The beast was there. Covered in tangled fur, standing high on two broad legs. The beast stared at him; its red eyes stared directly at Marks. Its enormous jaws open, showing rows of yellow teeth dripping with saliva, huge paws high in front of its large body. The beast snarled, only a few metres away. Then it attacked.

Mark reacted quickly and ran. He was supposed to kill this creature, but how could he? It was too much. Too fierce, too large and menacing. Mark ran through the mist breathing heavily, pumping his arms, stomping his legs trying to focus on getting to safety. The beast gained pace and ran on all fours after its prey. Howling, grunting, snarling, dribbling, licking its lips, gaining on Mark.

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Mark ran faster. Faster and faster through the narrow path, trying to go faster. He just had to get away and quickly.

"Raaaaaaaaaa!" the beast roared in rage.

" I must get away, must get away from this beast and quick, what’s that?" Mark spotted something. Something in the distance, the outlines of the object came clearer. It seemed to be a church. The local church, the church, which was at the end of the road that lead to Mark's house.

" I must be home," cried Mark," I must be."

Mark beginning to feel relieved but still extremely ...

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